Fated Fragment - Reviews

Seems like a decent story. Only read 10 chapsNormal guy runs into a mage and becomes his apprentice. Due to his poor elemental affinity he takes a mysterious potion that makes him a pure water mage. Have to see how it goes.

keep it up nice work........................................................................................................................................................................................................

Author is complete noob. But he has a vivid imagination and his narration abilities are great. .     .   . .  .................................

"Fuck. I do not have time for these things, I will take it to the ship "- Indra shouted desperate for not finding the right answer.

Delbury had half expected to see someone of the vamp type, a girl with pretty though hard features, with eyes that were mere traps for the unsuspecting---- eyes that could lie and smile. A lie with wicked facility. The clever daughter of a clever father---- that's what he expected to find.

"Are you perhaps upset?"

It still sadden and troubles him strongly, so he blurted out a wish he had.

Upon noticing Jack's loud entrance into the river they immediately became hostile and directed their attention at the Red Goblin.

<< Good morning, my dear sister, it seems that you were happy. I bet you thought you could be free, never forget, I always took everything, I'll take you that one again. >>

After entering the village, there were many things he was curious about, so he wanted to get all the possible answer from her.

I'm hooked but I'm not sure if this story has been abandoned...?

This is the best novel Axeema has written since "The Wishing Well". Now and again you come across a novel you can't simply put down. "Raise Of The Royal Blue Jaoji" is a spellbinding with an ancient vibes. This is an ancient fantasy that is worth all it's 31 Chapters.