Fated For The Alpha's Redemption

good one, but was cut short. if anyone know the title of the 2nd book please tell us, thank you.hope to read the 2nd book if there are any

Inconsistent with failed logic from the very start. It’s not as horrendous as other novels but it’s still terrible

I will give you a general feel for the story. There will be interactions between MC and Fang Yuan. MC is a reverend believer of Fang Yuan but also someone who dares to change fate. He will try to become stronger and also get Fang Yuan to complete the mission assigned to him by Heaven's will i.e. Foil Spectral Soul's plan. The rest is as you know. The MC will uncover the secrets behind Gu World and transmigration as he moves forward.

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This story is just cliche. That's all that really needs to be said, but I'll go on...Cliche list:MC treated like trash,anything you want and more system,max talent MC,MC has no intelligence (despite what is claimed),MC complains all the time despite not having to work as hard as any other person for his power (was complaining about working for months yet others have worked their entire lives),auction scene (not as cliche as others as he was selling but very cliche),alchemy (anything MC makes with his alchemy is better than what anyone else made and he obviously progresses as much in two months as others do in years),fiance (I don't even need to explain this one),family problems (one of the big families but is the declining one that has been teamed up on by the others).I could go on but you get the point.  Not necessarily a bad novel but just one that essentially seems like a list of cliche rather than an original story.

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