FALLING FOR MR. CEO - Reviews

Wow, I'm first to review this novel! I hope this is good as it looks really cool!  Is this kingdom builiding??? OMG! It's too good to be true...

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Very interesting plot and interesting concept.The character seems cool and system 0 is really snarky.I really like the timeline-jumping concept.The only thing that I felt could have been done better is to fix the grammatical errors but that can be fixed using something like Grammarly so no real harm done,

Update review: great story, but we still dont know what the mc is doing? He seems to be the evil mc since he sent 50 people to suicide, but the thing brothering me the most is that he doesnt have an objective and ambition..He is trying to build an empire I guess, but why? Why did he decide to build an empire? Why did he decide to go against the government, because he want to overturn the planet for his empire? Why is he trying to create an empire, what is his ambition? And dont tell me that it's because of *******, because it's clear he isn't going on for *******. Freedom seems less than 10% important now sinceFreedom =/= Building an empire and being the enemy of the whole world

The story is decent but the writing quality makes it torture to read.

There had been some tracks not far from here, that she had seen the night before, while everyone slept, that she wanted to check on.  If there were other people in the area, it could either be bad, or good.

"Somebody!"

A torre era planejada para que o sol entrasse em todas as áreas do local, Bellsprout tem uma habilidade aonde fica muito mais veloz quando está no sol.

"Take care of yourselves and always be careful. Don't always charge into trouble like last time. Believe in your comrades and never take on problems on your own" said Orthorn.

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid

Somebody once asked could I spare some change for gas?

here ya go a five star for excellent writing and good updating stability. I hope that this novel can make it to the ending you envision for it for the characters you have built so far are quite amazing however I do hope you can expand upon the descriptions of the locations