fallen veil - Reviews

Very enjoyable novel. The barbarian culture is simple and refreshing, much less drama and complicated scheming and bs. Mc is good, his power is cool and op and he does a pretty good job making use of it to get stronger. The only downside is the translation of the novel needs more editing, but it's not terrible.

So far I am hooked in this story and I have to say author you are doing amazing so far keep it up man can’t wait for more chapter!Also if you haven’t read this novel give it a shot!

Thy do be Busting..... Keep up the awesome work. So far I'm loving her system it's unique and cool. The world building is also unique. can't wait to see where this goes

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Decent story.The pacing was slow and for the start of the novel, I guess that's fine. The grammar and punctuation can be improved. There is potential but it depends on the author. I think the story could be great with an edit- but that's just my opinion. Anyway, good luck with the story.

Early review, neat concept and has some good protential. I will re-review later when there are 50 chapters.

"Good morning" I greeted.

With a shaking hand, I open the damn thing.

… Really. I don't care anymore. I don't care anymore about my beating heart. I don't care about the air I breathe. I don't care about my hurting ankles from the stilettos that I'm wearing.

"Francis!" he called, surprised.

Introduction - The summoner and the summoned -

Noticing that her stamina was so exhausted that she couldn't move even if she strained herself, which means we had such violent sex, Miyako looked downward embarrassingly and pushed her forehead against my chest