I like the story so far. Great job mr. author.The only thing I don’t like is the MC character being inconsistent. Sometimes he is determined and acts like a normal grownup, sometimes he acts like a child being dragged by the nose by others.
Bias not included; this is obviously the greatest work of our era. Simply an incredible piece of art.Jokes aside, any suggestions, criticisms, plot deficiencies, or the like would be greatly appreciated.
Haven't started reading it but i already hate Gabriel please don't make the FL end up with him CHEATER. And why is he even on our book cover. Now let me read it while abusing him in every scene. Let me hope we divorce him soon. And i already love Xavier he should be our ML no arguments here. Now let me read in peace. I trust the author so here we go.