ETERNAL DUSK

i ll give it a full 5 stars for now. Wish there was sample chapter for these new books to see if it would catch my interest.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Writing Quality:There are some grammatical errors and sentences that don't really make a whole lot of sense, but they don't hinder the understanding of the story. Plus, who doesn't have typeos?Stability of Updates:It's pretty stable, plus the idea to give out new chapters for powerstones is pretty ingenious if not time-consuming. Story Development: The story is great. Really great, although it can be predictable at times. Character design and world design:I love both. The characters are masterfully done and the world- although it was described in only a few sentences- is also good. I think that it's an ingenious idea. Overall, it's a great book. Keep writing. :)

This is my first novel from this author and I'm enjoying his style. The prologue is one of the best I've read so far. The characters are well written, the cultivation is easy to understand, and to me the best part of this novel are the villains that are not one-dimensional arrogant young masters that try to annoy the MC about futile things. They are ambitious and will do anything to achieve their goals. The only thing I didn't like was the beginning after the prologue, it was a really amazing start and then the pace slowed a little but it's ok.

Like the story it's pretty good and I love how the cover picture is a Magic the Gathering card.I dont know what else to write to reach 140.??

Great story so far! Love the intelligent MC who’s actually written in an intelligent way! Great fun, and plenty of Easter eggs during the auction.

When did you start writing this novel ? How many chapters are you willing to post weekly (an estimation) ? Are you going to drop this novel in the future like some other annoyed authors ?