ESCAPE Online - MMORPG - Reviews

My story is nowhere near perfect. It can never reach that state. But if you are here for serious character development, weak to strong, romance, hardcore battles, then you have come to the right place.Two volumes have been completed.First Volume- Massive fillers and introductions, no major character development, unexpected pace, and some boring tones.Second Volume- Sect development, character growth, rapid pace, tragedy, romance, some boring chapters, and proper story development.Basically, this novel doesn't have many things that you would like. But if you are looking for a story that has a serious story plot and story development, with lots of ups and downs, then you can join Johnny on his journey to surpass his father so that no one can manipulate him ever again.

the world background is nice. but all in all this book is boring to read. here is why.1. the translations are very sloppy.2. the system is not really used well by MC.3. the sub characters are cliche or copycats from other nobles.4. so many fillers.

Readers of Chinese novels commonly project themselves as the protagonist in the novel.So what does it say about the people who like this novel when the protagonist is basically a slave? He has no will of his own, but that of his mistress. He will stand tall when criticised by the masses, but when his mistress is displeased (small frown even) he will begin crying, desperately seeking to appease her. He cares naught for respect, dignity or selfworth - his world revolves around his star, his sun, his mistress. If she can smile at him once a day, he can forsake anything with a smile one his face.What's worse is that the system exists to make sure that the MC stays a slave - now, and forever. This novel is just ridiculous.

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Story so far seem somewhat generic, but there is a few unique takes here and there.English is good, updates are a bit slow, but writing is difficult so can't complain much.The main character is fairly fleshed outPersonally I like a bit more detail in my story eg. Base descriptions, what's in the crates he stole etc.The world background is very Interesting, but I don't feel like it's explored that much so far. But keep at it bud

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Polisi itu mengerutkan alisnya. Bukankah ilham yadi memberi kesaksian dan mengatakan bahwa junior adalah putranya.

" Apakah ini ramuan yang kamu pakai ketika melawan Red Dragon Serpent waktu itu? " Mark bertanya pada Avian dengan serius, dia pernah melihat Avian memakai ramuan yang mirip seperti itu dan efeknya dapat membuat Avian hilang kendali.

But not a single drop of blood came out and even his white colored shirt was not damaged.

"Mate?" Crysti snapped out of the lust induced haze. "Mr. Wolf, we just met." Her hand went to the invisible mark on her neck. It still tingled.

When they emerged half an hour later, Shen Yi was feeling much more alive and stretch. Lu Xinyi, on the other hand, was grumbling, albeit content as she washed off the remnants of their afternoon tryst.

"of course  I  know it big sis,So.... can you tell me how to become a adventurer?"