Endless Sword Formation Master

Ha ha, I told you that I'll also read this one. I liked it just as much as your other work. It was honestly a refreshing read.From my point of view, there was not one useless dialogue here, no  unnecessary info dumb, every little thing that was mentioned came back later. At some point I even forgot he had to go to a psychologist, it was a pleasant surprise to see it happening. I gotta say that seeing the protagonist, our dear Bambi, slowly integrate and interact with the Atkins was really heartwarming. Overall I absolutely recommend this to anyone that's tired of nonsensical plots, of mc's that think with their third leg. The story and character development is definitely there and man, it's really been a while since I have seen a character that's not made out of cardboard. I don't think there's any fella in the story that I dislike (leaving aside Bambi's biological family), expect maybe . . . one, but I won't mention who though -cough- Chris -cough-There's one thing I've noticed throughout the story and that really stuck out to me, Mr. Atkins' past, that caught me by surprise. The books where the parents actually get a 'past' of their own are few and far between. I absolutely love Mr. and Mrs. Atkins personalities. And since I really began to like them, I really dread them finding his biological dad. I can almost see him popping out of some hole when Bambi makes a name for himself in the baseball world or him meeting his brother beforehand on the baseball field, that would be some crazy sh!t.All in all I really like the story, what can I say more? Keep up the good work.**. I don't think I will ever be able to stop calling Bambi, Bambi, the nickname really stuck.

This is a good book, written if I am not mistaken by a doctor. However the translation has been going downhill making it difficult to read. is this MTL? How can Su Yun who obviously a guy became a She, instead of trying to add too many books, finish the ones you had properly. If you are just a fan translating people will understand if you are losing interest but you are taking people’s money, You have the responsibility to actually do it properly. I want to continue reading it but I won’t because its becoming ineligible.

The story is a mess.Rather than having the mc become a low level master black smith and show his importance it broke world building in order in order to show off Chinese weapons.Let me explain:From where I currently left the mc is already 7th grade in terms of power as a martial artist yet still hasn't advanced to low level master blacksmith yet.And oh by the way he became important to the kingdom. An apprentice blacksmith is a slave because mortal weapons are not really useful but for the sake of power fantasy the author made it so that mortal weapons have great importance. The author also made blacksmiths above apprentice almost nonexistent just so the mc has importance, only grandmasters have appeared. In fact the higher weapons are very very rare for some reason.When assassin went to the kingdom to assassinate a high target or targets none of them had a single weapon above mortal. Like excuse me? This isn't the end of the dumbness. For some reason the enemy kingdom just so happen to make a list of all the assassins that are going to kill the targets. Killing these targets would hurt the Xia kingdom. So why would they make a note like that? And why would they entrust that note on some low level martial artists? One of those targets have a very high rank so why? To hide it? Then why would those low ranks have a band of soldiers behind them? Because of that they were discovered. Why? So the mc could do something important even if he is weak. Why would mortal weapons not break or be inefficient against martial artist? So the mc can be important.More importantly so Chinese weapons can be praised. That's right all this world breaking is so the author can praise weapons. At least that is what I think otherwise why would the author do this?

Why is this in here? Why is Qidian taking everything in? Well I don't mind it if Qidian taking everything but I do mind it if the story going to be premium one!So, TWO is basically your everyday Chinese novel which depicts a lot lot lot of history of Chinese people's from the Yellow Emperor till date. If you don't like a lot of history you can pass this one but I recommend it to try.

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This story is also epic in scale like  "Ancient Godly Monarch" so I am surprised it is so low in the rankings. Good thing for readers like me who can't buy spirit stones but I do feel bad for the talented author.