Eclipsed monarch - Reviews

Well , this is a one good hell story, The best Gourment novel is which can make the reader feel hungry while reading the novel . This novel always make me hungry when i read it , the character design is not bad , while the story development is very intersting , but the world development is very poor because he stay in 1 place , overall this story its an awesome novel , and Must read , the jokes is hillarious .

Readers are in for a world of pain as far as cultivation terms are concerned. Although GGP's translation is acceptable. He leaves a lot of terms in pinyin. I myself had to do a lot of research to understand a lot of terms in BTTH. I mean Dou = Battle. Wang = King ( maybe?) Huang=? I only know that Di = Emperor ( From AGM ). As far as IET's novels are concerned a lot of mythologies are included if you want to enjoy the story you have 2 options.1) Convince GGP to do what RWX does.2) Search for it yourself.As far as the novel is concerned I believe IET ain't screwing it up. So enjoy my fellow readers!

This novel is quite good, it develops slow at the start but it's still entertaining. I really like this type of cultivation worldbuilding because it looks more realistic. I hope you will post new chapters it would be so sad if it got dropped.

if its only the second strongest then its trash                                                           .                                          

this will be sooooooooo gooood when i get to read it

If I have to be sincere, I read this novel till the end thanks to the characters around the MC... his friends, his teacher/master, his lover. As for the MC and the plot development? I felt disappointed and betrayed many times. The novel is well written with even the 'power-level' being well balanced. Sadly, I read and closed the novel for nothing more but curiosity and hope that the author won't mess or kill with the characters I so much loved in the story.The novel itself starts very slow-paced, but that is rather refreshing. The author knows well how to write the everyday events, training routine, common and funny days, etc.The first marking event of the novel that makes the MC completely abandon his 'home' in midst of the loss of his loved ones is what annoyed me from the start. How I can say... gave me that, "Oh~how convenient" vibe? That was the first forced part that I felt, and sadly many more appeared.The MC is TOO slow in maturing. We reach a point of the novel where he despite being aware of the dangers and 'loving' his friend and family, time and time again bought them to danger that could be avoided by chasing in the future when he was stronger (after all, the MC is aware of his own genius).Strangely, while he always ignores this act of neglecting his loved ones, he always breaks with random people or those that wanted to harm, r*ape or kill his family and friends. Of course, the character regretting or hesitating to kill a person is normal, but... the author messed so much with the forced events that he felt 'necessary', that the MC becomes something hateful, at the very least, for me.Concluding, is an amazing and complete story, but with adevelopment and ending that made me hate the novel even while living the characters.

Honestly you’re good at your description, it was clean and you can clearly see the storyline. Hope this will be notice and gets an exposure. Keep working author-san

Feels like the writer was going through something while writing this. Most plot points don’t make sense and there is a lack of explanation. The poor grammar and mixing up of names does not help either. I’ve decided to drop at chapter 14 after checking the reviews on the story (wish I had done that earlier). Final thoughts: The story is quite intriguing so far but the grammar and number of mistakes is just way too unbearable. Don’t recommend to others

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New review, as I start the first month of my premium challenges... (To boost my rating? Of course not... orz). I want to thank everyone who has supported the novel so far, whether it's through gifting stones, tickets, or leaving comments. You've kept me entertained and motivated...But I especially want to shout out to the two readers who bought the 4th tier of my privilege... yes, the one that's valued as a rip-off. Thank you so much; you are angels!The single chapter you unlocked definitely doesn't justify the cost, so I know you're doing it just to show your support. I can't express how much I appreciate it.Because of angels like you, and as long as there's at least one reader still interested, I will not abandon this story and will finish it properly.And to one of you who purchased the tier again already, thank you once more! At least this time, I gave a big discount on the privilege chapters for the month to feel better with myself… orzWell, that's all... Oh, wait! Amor hasn't received much love yet. Visit her in Fandom (Characters). By the way, harem is winning, and my wife isn't too happy about that... orzBut she'll have to accept it as she promised if the votes swing too much in that direction (It's not my fault, it's what the majority wants, hahaha Democracy).I'm already designing the harem characters…Feel free to ask anything about the story or suggest corrections. Nobody's perfect, so I'll be paying attention and responding to every comment.Once again, thank you all for your support!

First of all, I'm the first to review this future master piece!Now let's talk about the book, or well, chapters.Only two chaps rn, so can't say much, but since I know the author and I've seen her work before, I'm sure that this one is going to be a hit.The start of the book is good as well, the plot although not something extremely rare, it's still better than most of them you'll find out there on WN.Yeah, there are not many chaps to talk about the plot but a man can guess right?And as I said at the start, this is going to be a future master piece!That's all for the review.

after all although carl is only 6 years old his hight already 156 cm