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The interesting premise it started with got me reading. Maddox gave me a feeling of being laid back and I am looking forward to seeing how his character develops. Minimal grammar mistake. But doesn't affect the story flow. With 4 chapters, I can't wait for more updates. Keep going author!

It has potential, but it has some points that should be improved in my opinion. The MC is very passive, has no ambition. I understand that caution is necessary, but there is a fine line between caution and cowardice. If the MC had ambition, he would look for more women to marry, so his power would increase. With more power the MC would expand his territory, his fame would increase, and more notable women would appear to be his concubine, so his power would exponentially increase the amount of women he has, like a snowball. Currently the MC just waits for someone to attack, then fight back, his only desire is to keep his rural town. It's really disappointing to see a novel with so much potential go down this path. Without power everything he has can be taken away at the whim of the powerful, ambition is a basic need in this kind of chaotic world.

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"So, what'd you think?" he suddenly asked.

Did something happen in the meeting with the viceroy, was the unspoken question.

And though Michael is a giant of a man, quite intimidating at first glance, he's actually just a big teddy bear. He's safe --- just what I've been needing all along.

AGI: 50

As soon as she became alone, downpour begins.She let a small laughter. Seems like the weather hewers with her feelings.

THIS BOOK WOULD BE GRATE IF IT DIDNT GO BACK AND FORTH BETWEEN WORLDS!! ITS DEFINITELY DIFFERENT BUT I JUST DONT LIKE HOW ALL OF THIS OS GOING ON!! AND HONESTLY THE MC SHOULD DIE AND GO TO THERE WORLD AS A HUMAN AND THEN START TO CHANGE AND ALL THAT THIS MAKES IT INTERESTING BUT FOR ME IT JUST DOESNT FEEL RIGHT... I LIKE IT BUT I DONT AT THE SAME TIME ITS REAL HARD TO EXPLAIN!! I HOPE Y CAN COME OUT WITH ANOTHER BOOK WHERE THE PERSON FINDS SO CRACK IN SPACE ON THERE OWN WORLD AND GOSE THROUGH OR IT EVEN IN A CAVE AND AS HE GOSE THROUGH HE GETS TO TALK TO GODS AND GODDESSES AND TELLS THEM THAT HE DOESNT WANT TO BE A WEAK HUMAN ANY MORE THAT THE HUMAN RACE SHOULD DIE BUT THEY ALL KNOW HOW MUCH HE HAS BEEN THROUGH THATS Y HES ALLOWED TO GO THROUGH THE PASSAGE AND ALL THAT AND HAVE HIM BE REBORN AS A REALLY SMALL KID MAYBE NOT A BABY BUT A SMALL KID TO WHERE HE CAN BOND WOTH THE FAMILY AND MAKE IT HIS OWN AT SOME POINT AND THIS HE CAN GET POWERS WITH THE SYSTEMS HELP AND HAVE HIM GET POWERS LIKE LIKE THE DRAGON AND LIKE IN THIS BOOK SLOWLY BUT HAVE HIM GET OTHER AND EVEN HAVE HIM GET A BEAST TAMING POWER THIS WAY EVEN WITH OUT A CONTRACT HE CAN HAVE ALL THE BEAST LISTEN TO HIM AND HE WOULD ONLY MAKE A CONTRACT WITH THE STRONGEST OF RACES THIS WAY HE CAN HAVE ALL PERSON GUARDS THAT R THE STRONGEST FROM THERE RACE AND HE CAN EVEN HELP THEM BECAUSE STRONGER AND AFTER THAT HER CAN FALL FOR A PRINCESS OR BUILD HIS OWN KINGDOME OR FIGHT IN A TOURNAMENT FOR A PRINCESS OR HAVE HIM BUILD A KINGDOME WHERE HE GETS ALL OF THE MONEY FOR IT AND RESOURCES HAVE HIM STEAL THEM FOR OTHER KINGDOMES AND NO ONE CAN SEE HIM BECAUSE ITS ONE OF HIS ABILITIES AND HAVE HIM FIND TREASURE TOMBS AND SO ON AND THIS WAY HE WILL HAVE ENOUGH OF EVERYTHING AND LET HIM FIND A PLACE BETWEEN 2 OF THE STRONGEST KINGDOMES OR HAVE HIM FIND A PLACE WHERE PEOPLE DONT LIKE TO GO ON THE OUTSKIRTS OF A PIECE OF LAND AND HAVE HIM BUILD OT THERE AND ONE ITS BUILT HE CAN FIGHT IN THE TOURNAMENT AND WIN AND MAKE HIS KINGDOME KNOWN AND HE CAN GET A PRINCESS BUT HAVE MIH NOT FORCE HER HE CAN TAKE HIS TIME TO GET TO KNOW HER AND ALL THAT AND MAYBE HAVE HIM FIGJT IN OTHER TOURNAMENTS TO GET OTHER PRINCESS TO PUT PRESSURE ON THE OTHERS 1 OR 1S TO EITHER STAY OR GO OR THEY CAN ALL STAY AND HIS KINGDOME CAN THRIVE HAVE HIM HAVE HIS HAND IN MANY BUSINESS TO BECOME EVEN RICHER AND HAVE A POERT CITY THE BIGGEST ONE EVER THIS WAY IT BECOMES THE BIGGEST PLACE FOR SHIPS TO COME IN AND OFF LOAF AND LOAD THERE RESOURCES TO HIS KINGDOME THIS WAY HE CAN THRIVE EVEN MORE AND HAVE HIS KINGDOME KINDA IN A HIGH PLACE TO HAVE A NICE SCENERY SO PEOPLE WILL WANT TO GO SEE SOMETHING BEAUTIFUL BUT ALSO HAVE A SAFE PLACE BECAUSE IT WOULD BE HARD FOR ARMYS TO GET UP THERE AND HE CAN HAVE OTHER CITYS DOWN THE MOUNTAIN OR A VERY BUG HILL SO THIS WAY THERE SAFTT CHECKPOINTS AND HAVE THE MOUNTAIN NOT BE SUPPER COLD BUT NOT SUPPER HIT ITS RIGHT ALL YEAR FOR THE MOST PART IT WILL DROP AND RISE A LITTLE BUT IT WILL BE MANAGEABLE AND MAYBE HAVE HIM FIND IT WHEN HE IS GROWING UP LOOKING FOR TREASURE TOMBS AND WORKING FOR THE GUILD BUT ITS JUST AN IDEA AND WOULD REALLY LOVE IT TO COME TO LIFE IF POSSIBLE WITHOUT IT BEING TO MUCH OR TO LITTLE AND NOT HAVE IT NOT FEEL RIGHT OR WRONG LIKE THIS BOOK ITS JUST SO CONFUSING ON HOW TO EXPLAIN THIS BOOK... ITS GOOD AND HAS GOOD POTENTIAL BUT JUST FEELS LIKE ITS CONFUSING OR THE FEELING ISNT RIGHT IDK LIKE I SAID ITS CONFUSING TO PUT IN WORDS... BUT I HOPE U KEEP GOING WITH UR BOOK!! AND DONT MIND THE CAPS MY PHONE IS BROKE!

Good pacing, arrogant mc with spine from mageless to be the greatest mage.loved the concept?