Echelon: Trials - Reviews

petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

Author's been bugging me for quite some time now for a review so here goes.It's good. There's action, there's haŕem and there's weird powers. Some stuff are quite basic and some scenes are dramatic for no reason.But overall, not bad. In fact, dare I say  it's good. Ya Happy now, Yet?

"You would not believe this, I got a notification from the faculty office and we have a new member this year. And guess what? The new member non other than the newbie who just defeated Leah. Can you believe it?" she stated it without breathing, just like a flash news. Both the creatures faced Mandy abruptly, who was now hanging both their jaws. Mandy felt uncomfortable by their stares. She never expected they would react that way.

Lucy swallowed thickly, nervous. She'd met Crowley Swanson once before, though they hadn't spoken to each other. She remembered the moment, and knew without a doubt that he would recognize her, just like Gray was worried about...

"Okay, but this will be under me, not dad. "

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

Only shooting stars break the mold

The story starts of as wild but the details are clear and understood and as always the world building is great and the Mc is good and the refrences are perfectly timed, the story itself has a great potential som I’m looking forward for more.

With some more polishing/editing this gem of spicy smut could shine a lot brighter. Try not to rely on grammarly too much but pace yourself and reread your chapter before posting. Fix any mistakes. Still put Max stars cause has plenty of decent smut scenes.

The grammar and writing is superb... I'm just so over  2010's type of CEO stories and the angst that came with it... but it was a good read. keep up the good work. it was not boring and till now the story is not draggy...so good work

Hello author here! If u like the novel do rate it and comment below for any suggestions Thanks for reading.

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