Downfall (A Short Story)

very nice story and well arranged one too

i dont understand the chinese they love japanese anime and like to make fanfiction about it but when they make their own novels they are very racist and nationalist. It just ruins a good story, "i can incarnate everything" takes place on earth but it has 0 nationalism and it is a great story but these writers ruin everything when they make racist comments in their novel.

The ****?The prologue was VERY confusing, couldn't understand anything at all though the writing and grammar was decent..... UNTIL THE NEXT DAMN CHAPTER. Just what? Random characters, random brackets and randomly switching between " and ' for no reason at all, the grammar of even one chapter has been worse than 80% of the other novels i've read, couldn't even take it seriously.The premise of the story is good and initially was very excited, but the grammar ruined everything. Im not even exaggerating, usually when I see people complaining about grammar I roll my eyes so hard im gonna go blind since it's usually decent. So yes, grammar sensitive readers, just forget it.

You cant help but fall in love with this story, And i for one thoroughly enjoyed every single word and sentences in the pages. Have my stones.

THE BEST NOVEL I'VE EVER READ WE NEED MORE NOVELS SND AUTHORS LIKE MISS ASHWINI AND ITS VERY INTERESTING I LOVE IT SHE DEFINITELY DESERVES MORE AND I WISH HER GOOD LUCK MORE POWER TO U MISS ASH AND I'M MOTIVATED I'LL TRY TO MAKE A GOOD NOVEL LIKE HER I LOVE YOUR NOVEL ITS PERFECT!!!?Lia-?

Very interesting cross over. The Mc is a bit too OP' being a divine sovereign in just 7 chapters.so the novel probably wont be too long. Unless he goes to dbz or some other strong universe. But a very nice novel nonetheless. Good job, looking forward to your  future works.