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Ok I’m only on chapter 12, but this is absolutely beautifully written, im actually have trouble believing this is an original on webnovel as this could genuinely be a full fledged book

This story started out great but after the first 40 chapters it becomes an IQ reducing waste of time. The protagonist is the weakest and most indecisive character in the book! He makes all the wrong decisions and falls for the same trick more than three times. He doesn't think rationally and the only time he takes action is the go on rampage AFTER his girlfriend has already been hurt.

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To be a erotic novel it's well done maybe Theres are litlie problems but overal it's good, i don't Read this because it's ero nope....*cough* *cough* well are very few chapters to pass a judge yo this novel but if it's well planned can be really good

The books not bad but the essence of it is missing took more than 11 chapter to chase an evil cultivator for which was a waste then there's the toad of all the fierce beasts out the his first is a toad I mean how are we suppose to take him serious. Well they haven't even entered the sect and he's already disadvantaged the toad grows so so so so slow Gamabunta would have been awesome

I started reading this novel due to the daily updates notice, sadly I am dropping it now, while I tolerated a lot in the beginning hoping it would improve sadly it is still as mediocre as ever. 1-2d characters, near total lack of world building, zero romance, a plethora of spelling and word mistakes that makes it seem totally machine translated. In short I advise the author to learn as much as he can from his mistakes, get an editor, then rewrite the whole novel, if he ever wants to actually pick up enough support to finish it.