Disciple, you are invincible - Reviews

minor spoilers only. the beginning of the story was amazing and actually left me feeling real emotion for the character. once Jason leaves Argos, the story rapidly declines. the last several chapters were extremely dull. it's just constant 100 year time skips with no real relevance other than Jason getting stronger. the author says that it's rushed in order to form a multiverse, however none of the authors other novels are developed to the point where it was required. the characters from the other novels were also unnecessary for the story as they didn't contribute anything. I would have loved if the story was another 2000 chapters, the super beast that was so scary on argos that the war had to stop was never brought up. a reunion with Greg would have been great. he adopted a girl to never see her again. it does leave me concerned about the other novels by this author I'm currently reading. hopefully they don't drop in quality and carry out for a few thousand chapters instead of just one thousand

It's not bad nor good. Well if you are looking for face slapping, then you might enjoy it. I hope it's not harem but I think it probably would be.

This novel reminds me of 'I'm Actually a Cultivation Bigshot' there are different scenarios too but the idea came from that novel I mentioned earlier. Sigh~

this novel give a novel overpowered starting idea but the novel does nothing to keep up with it it drop real fast in quality and I had to stop at chapter because so many mistakes were made by that point in that I had to give reading it before the headache it gave me became worse. overall poor experience.

Good. Continue the story???.........................................................................................................

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So i have really enjoyed this story. There are some issues with typos . most of the ones i have notice are where two words get crammed together i.e missing the space between them. Some time is will take me a second to figure out the word i am reading is not really a word but two. That being said, the story is well written. At points have found myself so engaged and not wanting to stop reading that i have lost half a day. The only negative i have found, is the same for all the stories on WN that are not completed yet, and that is having to wait for the next chapter to be released. I look forward to the stories continuation.

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Idade: Atual 15,  ( 48 Anterior)

"Oh dear student of mine, you should that there are people on the council that will approve of you being here, because there are still people who care about you in the supernatural world." He looks over at the time on the stove and says, "I think it is time for us to go don't you we would like to make it back at a reasonable time tomorrow don't you."