Dirty nights 2

Like the path the story is taking and the style is one of my favorite. If I have to give a suggestion is to reduce a little bit the morons side of the story. This is the kind of young master owns the world and gets slap in the face, but this kind of characters should get a bit less story time to improve the pacing. Also I feel a bit sad when we get 1 character that is so bad that ruins a good story, sometimes is the MC, other times is antagonist, in this one it’s is friend Leonel. The dude have a 5years old brain and no common sence and MC instead of educate him his supporting his decisions. please upgrade him to at least a 12 years brain so he can tell right from wrong!

Fml’s family disrespecting mc and the mc allowing it to happen. CHECKMc face slapping at fml class reunion and karaoke. CheckMc being up fml butt. CheckMc shows fml how capable his background is multiple times but she still doesn’ use his help. Check All the cliche that a Chinese novels has is in here but all stuffed into 40 chapters

The synopsis is quite interesting, and the storyline is quite interesting. However, a lot of editing is needed when it comes to grammar. Other than that, it is a well-written story.

This has been a truly unique experience so far. I really hope that there's a focus on the mother but it seems it can go either way. Pretty touching story so far. The quality isn't bad as well. A few minor fixes needed grammatically but they're so minor that it doesn't matter much. People might be bothered by what seems to be a once a week chapter release BUT if the author releases gold, I can definitely wait.

Great novelSimple kingdom building and cultivation system that is unique..Characters are not just 2D but have background and can think for themselves...No cliches ...the spiritual tournament is not your classic going for the top prize...he went to connect with different people whom he can't meet in his territory.Girls don't fall for him and every girl he sleeps with doesn't become his wife..Overall good original novel and hope author continues it

I like the cool, mysterious world and feel of the book! Story is heading in a great direction!