Devil's Downfall - Reviews

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I don't understand how did they even thought of translating this into English.................................................................

This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

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REVIEWNarration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyMESSAGEI am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) ?Nice Synopsis! I am hooked! Definitely will add this and read for more!

i did like the first chapters who were pretty interesting but the fact that the author began to introduce the concept of polygamia moreover when the characters are 10years old and some physical descriptions of a 13 year old girl were (in my opinion) sexualised made me really uncomfortable and drop the book. Nonetheless it might just an impression and I encourage you to give it a shot to see by yourself if it does bother you.

Its an interesting story with fantastic plot and loveable characters. Whats there not to love in this story? I usually don't read original works but I can make an exemption for this one. Keep up the good work!

I enjoyed reading and will ready more, If I have time and there are more chapters available.the story hast flow, the writing is good and I like the charakters.thanks for the nice work

Lin feng smiled "mother I just gone out to buy some books.I also bought something for both of you as well" saying so he took out a beautiful looking bracelet and necklace. "Mother this necklace is for you and this bracelet is for little yin".

" We all know we've gotten no coin so far, it might be your thoughts of getting one that is making you go crazy" said Zil as he beamed. Klora felt stupid since no one believed him. He looked at them one by one and eventually faced Boyun.

Allen looked up to heaven whilst praying to god that something may go well. Oliver pulled out his wallet, "I've got a few bills..."

"D-does that mean I'm no good?"