Departure of The Moon - Reviews

I don't know but the male lead is so character less ,I mean if you read the story till recently updated chapters , you might realize that he pinpointed Hailey's mistake of having an extra marital affair and sleeping out but he did it too when  he is married with Lauren and in relationship with victoria,  he did cheated with emily(Victoria's sister), elle(jenny), park Anya and with Hailey too and basically with lota Schmid too. He even treats himself as overlord because he's an diety but he should remember he's not a god and he have no rights to call Hailey as bit** cause he cheated on his wives too.

You think you can write about what the smartest and richest person in the world and a person who has not inherited and succeeded by working alone can do in a less developed world.

师兄, 师姐, etc are such easy terms to translate and important but yet they are used as pinyin. Every translator uses the English equivalent.  I don't understand the logic of using pinyin.  Also, many sects/locations names need to be translated in order to convey the meaning to English readers but sadly they have been kept in pinyin. It results in loosing some of the story which author wants to convey.Well, the story is good and I love the protagonist. I have read till Ch240 in raws and it's one of my favorite. I hope the translator would notice this and change certain terms for the benefit of readers.

A wonderful novel, especially the character of the hero and his intelligence, so far I have been amazed by his plans to increase his resources. The current problem is the amount of information that is useless, because it is more than the events of about 50 chapters, and I still do not see exciting events. This is because of the author's focus on quantity rather than quality, I hope you pay attention to this point,  Reduce the amount of information and increase events and actions instead of ideas. I have high expectations for this novel and it does not change the character of the hero.  Good luck

This just happened to pop out of recommendation when I was opening webnovel and I feel so lucky that I had clicked it, the plot and the story was just what I was looking for and I really love how the characters interact with each other, it was really written well and was definitely a good catchヽ(♡‿♡)ノ, this needs more attention!!!

Actually a very good writing love it the suspension u have in it story it's just amazing please guy support him with star and stone . he is a beginner but writting like a experience

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Pero teka mlessean hindi ka sasama pag balik huh?"

Saat itu halaman kampus penuh sesak mahasiswa baru yang sedang mencari kegiatan kampus apa yang mereka akan ikuti. Disitu ada segerombolan gadis gadis sosialita yang sedang nongkrong di depan mobil mewah mereka.  Meysha dan tika lewat begitusaja di depan gerombolan gadis gadis itu yang tanpa sadar suara tawa mereka terdengar sangat keras sekali. "ehh..  Nel..  lihat gadis yang rambutnya di kucir itu,  bukankah dia adik tingkatmu ya waktu di SMA?" ucap Zaza salah seorang wanita yang berada di gerombolan gadis sosialita itu.  "ohh..  iya itu si Meysha.. dia ternyata juga kuliah disinii..  akuu malasss deh lihatt mukanya" sahut Nella ya notabene adalah senior Meysha waktu SMA.  "hahahaha..  kamu males karena dia cantikk ya.. "sahut lily sambil terus memandang meysha.  "what..  hallo..  kamu buta ya jelas jelas aku nggak level di bandingkan dia.  cantikkan akulah!!" sahut Nella dengan nada emosi mendengan perkataan lily walaupun di dalam hatinya tidak dapat dipungkiri kalau Meysha itu cantik.  "ohh.. sorry bebs bercanda kalii.. " ucap lily sambil mengedipkan matanya ke Nella.  

Exited by the sudden prospect of a new attribute, Lewis mentally shouted " Stats !!!!! ". The blue page came into life once again with this message.

Judith entered the class with her clothes rumpled and torn Katherine rushed to her friend and took her to the locker room but the class are already talking about her..

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