Deep Down Your Black Heart - Reviews

Wow this story is comolete and utter GARBAGE. waste of four hours. please pause this story, go on YouTube and learn how to write a story and before you post use Gramerly. The story has a interesting concept but the world building is terrible, not to mention the exposition of a 13yr final exam essay. This story seems like a 13yr with mommy issues that gets bullied at school wrote this. I would say more but the story is so terrible that you would have to pay me to give pointers on the specifics of what you did wrong. I'm mainly angry that I wastes my 2hr of my time on this but. But if I didn't tell you your  story is trash you'd have a whole bunch of yes men enabling you stagnation as a writer

...............Amazing story. The development is great. I love how the world transmigration happens. All characters are well desiged and have unique personalities..............

Great story so far. Has gotten really repetitive at this point. Gets skill book, arc becomes about skill book. Conflict ensues, Zhang Ye face smacks. Rinse and repeat. Still great story but 700 chapters is only 6 months. I mean really, you have done all of this in that time frame LMAO. Worth the read and one of the better books on this site.

I have no idea what this is. I just know its probably a master-disciple novel, and the MC will be old. That in itself already separates this novel from quite literally most anything on this website. That is why I want this to be chosen.

The mc seems to be the result of mixing a face slapping young master into the body of a near homeless peasent and then the homeless dude try’s to act like he’s all that but he has no powers and disregards his system. Until the chapters get locked it’s a story about a mentally deficient bum trying to become a villain but failing. Has potential I’d he’d probably become interesting around chapter 90-100.

"Luck has really a part of life, huh?"I'll be honest... I haven't read that far into it. But I don't think I have any interest in going any further.When I first started the read it seemed super interesting and I was excited to see where it went, expecting another good survival semi-loner build em up with the usual BA and cunning main character. But then he randomly enters a cave. Gets an absurdly good body. Learns busted dark magic. Gets   a 2x experience skill. Gets an entire set of robes and accessories, each of which practically doubling his stats (one giving him Goku's nimbus cloud). And finally practically just finds a pot of experience bringing him From his hard worked lvl 24 to a easy 80 (etc.). Basically... The quick turn of events all in one chapter brought me from excitedly curious to flacid at how boring ad unimpressive the quality of the me and story is.

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I just started reading this novel today, and I already want to see the Author succeed in life. Not only is the direction of the novel something that makes me want to keep reading, but the creativity within the situation of the MC and the comedy slipped in between make it that much more lovable. If not for me, please continue making more as a tribute to your great self Author. To those other readers I say dip your toes into this novel if you haven't already, even if the beginning may not hook you, I am sure that as you continue to read, you may see things my way!

"Exactly. The three squads of Royal Enslavers i sent finally came back with some good news. They discovered a village. An elf village to be precise. We suspect that it's a branch of the Elves that got scattered in the myriad of planes after the bitter Dimensional Battles from the past and they took refugee there but lost connection with the space so they were unable to return."

In case the rules would limit the number of people entering the dungeon, as well as make good use of the higher floors, as John would have 2 floors early, this rule would make it possible for teams to use both floors simultaneously.

-I wanted you to organize some free people for me-

The king stands to speak, "We have gathered here to see my two sons battle to prove who is worthy to accompany these travelers on their journey. Yes the one isn't my actual son but I did raise him so he is still my son. Guards form a circle around them so they can start the battle". Hundreds of  guards started to gather around the two as they stood to get ready to fight. The Guards and soldiers begin to chant and shout calling for the duel between Leonidas and Alexander to start. As Leonidas enters the arena and slowly walks towards Alexander he begins to remember the conversation he had with the maid who was close to his mother, he starts to frown and begins to focus on the battle ahead and prove his worth to the king. Alexander smirks and looks at the approaching Leonidas, "I will put you out of your misery mongrel"