DEATH:When I became human - Reviews

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It’s a pretty interesting book for those of you who are interested

hi this book is great I love most of it so yeah I love some of the some they add in to the book ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?is amazing ? ? ?

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Loved it. As pretty much every other comment has mentioned, it DOES have "The Gamer" webtoon vibes in the beginning, but I'm telling you now, it goes completely off track from The Gamer later on. I mean, COMPLETELY.Overall it was a very good read, but it's a shame that this is the one and probably the only arc for this novel, as it's been a few months since the last release. I was really looking forward to the next arc, to be honest.

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Snow got up from where she was sitting and stretched herself for a few second and she said " since your an enhancer the first part of your train will be running I know that this simple and stupid but at the speed we will be running at and the terrain in this forest it will require concentration and fast reflexes.

-- For translations, two chapters a day is a great speed. More than that seems sloppy.

Except the patrols.

"what you went using Chakra" asked Kiba surprised "yes I didn't know the rule didn't apply here" Naruto said, and Kiba passes the ball back to naruto and  3 2 1 Kakashi blows the whistle and Naruto attacks these time applying Chakra to his feet and dribbling the the dafence as though they were standing still " what the hell I didn't see him" was the collective thoughts of the defenders while Kakashi saw the whole thing and thought " damn that kid is fast" back to the field is one on one neji vs Naruto " just like how granny taught me how to control Chakra I will use super strength to score as Naruto shoots and the ball gets an aura of a fire fox going straight to the goal post and neji catches it only to be overpowered and it scores"there is complete silence "yes I did it celebrated" Naruto " now we have found the playmaker" stated a smirking Kakashi " damn it I have to train more and master the rotation before the tournament" neji thought " wow did u see that Naruto is the second guy to score against neji, sasuke being the first" exclaimed Sai.

"Eeep!"

She sneered. I bet he's not actually thinking about my safety. He was actually thinking about his reputation's safety. What a load of bull.