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honestly, a lot of versatility, many friends and family, the protagonist seems to be passive, the premise that made me want to read the novel was a samurai, a man of “honor” who kills without blinking an eye.  I can't stand to see if the MC gets to this, a lot of bull****, thanks for the romance.
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Started reading yesterday and have caught up as of just a few minutes ago. I had been searching for a kingdom-building novel for some time now and this really scratches that itch. The characters Jun meets feel genuine and fleshed out, the dynamics/feelings between them seem realistic. The worldbuilding is also quite detailed and the video game elements give it a nice spin opposed to a regular apocalypse novel. The writing is decent and stays consistent throughout the chapters I've read, slight improvements have been noted but there's still some grammar mistakes here and there but one easily reads past those, it's not annoying enough for me to call it a flaw. And I'm sure that the Author over the time of writing this novel will slowly improve his style. All in all I love the novel so far and have enjoyed every minute of reading it, keep on trucking Author and I hope this gets the attention it deserves. ** if you're in need of reviews maybe swap some with other writers on the Webnovel forums, that could also give you an insight into what other writers think could improve or what you do really well. Thanks for writing Author! (っ˘з(˘⌣˘ )
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Well I was reading all the review of other people and was kind of bias against this novel deciding I've read enough reincarnation/silk pant/loving parent type story. Then I read the translator's own comment and I've to say it caught my attention. I want villains who have reason to kill, I want MC who's main aspect is not his iron fist(F*cking terrible Netflix show btw). So translator I'll be reading this when it comes out. Don't disappoint me. Thinking of changing username (Suggestions?)
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My first exposure to eastern fantasy. As such I really love the way the world is built.  little hard to follow the different power scaling involved in the story
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overall this is the book that is readable in this batch
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I'm impressed! The author's imagination is wild! I really want to read this novel now! Every chapter has hooked me! Please, author, continue writing!!!
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Try this book, it's so awesome. SCIENCE FICTION ARE REALLY A THING!!!♥️ The title speak for itself, and I guess the author has more potential on posting it to other websites, not only here on webnovel!
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There's not much for me to, just some concern about the MC's system. When I think about it, there's no need for the MC to work hard, he can just invest and invest then he'll get 10x rebate. That's why I'm hoping for the author to give a proper limitation its benefits. Moreover, in perspective, not all people are that easygoing. That they would help someone just by knowing their name or something, but I might be wrong. Maybe there's some hidden agenda or whatnot. Anyway, it's a good read.
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The novel is well made and is enjoyable. The only thing that sucks about this novel is the unsatisfactory ending which leaves too many questions as the translator and the author said. This novel might lead to fan-fiction if someone has the time since there are many unanswered questions which I don't want to spoil.
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Hello everyone, I am finally reviewing this work of mine for the first time ever after 462 chapters! *Caresses his beard in utmost seriousness*Before anything, let me give you a short version of what you will be getting yourself into:Think of Virus (MC) as Pinocchio, only, instead of a doll, he’s an extremely advanced artificial intelligence who coincidentally jumps back in time to our current Earth.Anyway, the Pinocchio of our story who had been just an artificial boy his entire life enters a biological body, thus becoming a real boy!Now, the real boy of our story together with futuristic knowledge at his beck and call starts cultivation while actually utilizing that very knowledge of science and technology.However, now that he’s a real boy, he starts experiencing problems and issues he never thought were possible.As you read into the story, the world will get bigger and bigger as unexpected developments, both small and large, will take you by surprise and leave you flabbergasted.+++++If you ask me, is [The God Virus] worth my time and more? I can only say try it and decide for yourself, don’t let my or anyone else’s bias affect you. Still, if you did indeed decide to give it a shot, persist through some of the pre-cultivation slow burn and neophyte writing at the earlier chapters and get to the real cultivation stuff and you’ll see what you had nearly missed.+++++Some of the things you can expect to see in the story:1. Cultivation is extremely unique, I don’t just randomly add stage names and say he gathered even more energy this time or whatnot and broke through from the first level to the second level, then from the second level to the third level, and so on! There is a specific system of cultivation that will make you enjoy immersing yourself in the process as you get to the real cultivation stuff!2. Virus is very smart in brain matters, an extremely intelligent anti-hero main character that doesn’t fear destroying all those hindering his path if he wants to, I say this with confidence and you will agree unless you forget what Virus’ main goal in living and the core of his personality is at each specific point in the story.3. The writing quality increases as you advance, you will feel the writing quality leveling up the more you read into the story. However, even in the earlier chapters, you won’t have any difficulties understanding the sentences, they flow smooth enough, only that the writing quality may be lower comparatively.4. Let’s get this out of the window as well, Virus is no saint, he’s not selfless, I mean he’s named Virus for God's sake, did you expect him to be like Mother Teresa? *Flings aside his white beard violently*5. Yes, there’s a deep romance happening, but it won’t be the main focus of the story.6. There is so much more I can say, but why should I say it when you can read it and decide for yourself? Anyway, if my brief introduction hooked you, then I guess you’re in the right place.

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