Cosmic Dream - Reviews

Ahhhh, is this how the original novel is or did the translation make it worse. The MC is stupid, the novel has so many question yet to be answer, and this novel is rush. They didn’t explain the MC action and didn’t explain about the world. For example, the MC evolved to a Yellow grade flame and the author still didn’t explain the difference between yellow and black grade, they just say yellow grade and expect you to go along with it.

Veraciously narrated, the story is wondrous. I have seen so many stories like this genre but this one provoked my curiosity. I am thinking why in every group there are two elites from like the ultimate and only one is normal. As if the game creator is trying to find out who is more intelligent. The elites? Or the normal ones? Keep it up, let us satisfy with your words! Cause we need more chapters!!

In the initial three chapters, Jack is depicted as a grandfather who longs for family bonding, but is isolated from them through a series of unfortunate events. The unfortunate events he experienced makes it seem his attachment to his world will fade after the initial shock of being transported. In summary, Jack is a likeable character. Although, the new world background has not been fully introduced yet. However, judging by the quality of the story and the first interaction with the new character from the New World, it will not be disappointing. Something I found interesting is how the main character ends up in awkward situation as soon as he is transported.

Dunno if I want to start this since it's probably going to get dropped... I'll start if it makes it to 100 chapters.                                                                                                 .

Even though at first it feel like a typical weak to strong stories there is something in this book that is not in other books of same genre, the world ground. Compared to the other novels the world background is different in this book making it standout. With a little editing this will become an outsatnding book t o read!!!

This story gives, I Was Caught up in a Hero Summoning, but That World Is at Peace, vibes. And by going by how enjoyable that story turned out to be and how this story is shaping up I am thoroughly exited. It's been a while since I found a genuinely enjoyable story. Keep up the good work! (ﾉ≧∀≦)ﾉ

She felt so happy in that moment that she started singing in the shower.

"Calma Isaac, ela é uma garota então não estrague tudo..." Pensou Isaac soando enquanto Marill pulou do seu colo e abraçou a menina.

" Hey Wonho hyung~ What's with the thinking at this late night hour? " I.M suddenly jumps in and asked me.

I don't read a lot of books here, but this one reminds me of ones I do like. It has a darker tone to what I usually rear, but the interest it is creating in the schemes is something that I want to read more about.

it's not bad.Slightly improve on your writing but other than that it has potential