the words were repetitive, and their were so many grammatical errors and the story just didn't seem realistic enough, the plot needed better structure.
Such a good book!! I love all her books! They will suck you in and loving one book more than the other as you work your way through. This is a series I could more than once easily. Definitely worth the read!!
Again another 10 for you! Cant wait for more I hope you are able to write a few more chapter, honestly you have a great future writing! Keep up the great work.
