Chasing Jade - Reviews

The title is so attractive, and the cover is an amazing girl, please Eric stay strong, your human mate ............ pari is coming to you,  AUTHOR GIVE ME ERICCCCC

Snaps right into the action when i least expect it. Dialogue that has you expecting a lighthearted adventure. The mystery shrouding it all has you on suspense though. A good recommendation

The story had an interesting premise that I was drawn to but after the first 40 chapters, it delved into utter boredom. The female Mc is so annoying gosh. The mc for all the hype of how bad he is I never really get to see him be ruthless and kill. He leaves ppl alive. I kind of understand sparing the female Mc but why the guy who reported him. I tried to continue after those chapters but I can't subject myself to that torture. All in all, it was an ok read up to 40.

mind control mind control mind control mind control

Racist as one can be in the later chapters. Do not read as it is disturbing. Im really dissapointed in the author, it is a shame that he turned out to be like this

Lol last updated 51yr haha                                                                                                                     

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Hello, lil kitty~! I rarely read and leave reviews because I too focused on my writing so much however, this day is different because I want to read what my friends are writing. Here goes~!First 2 chapters are up, and it is already interesting! Knowing that you are writing at a young age, this is already good~! I like your choice of words! The atmosphere of the setting is light hearted as it is fun! I know that this story will soon have a twist, ya know? I am going to expect more from you, lil kitty~! You made me smile! Keep up the good work! I can really see potential~!

As the first review, I must say that the novel can be great and the writing quality is there. I think if the paragraphs were a bit shorter sometimes it would probably gain traction very fast!

I want to like this story, but MC is so dumb, and as of chapter 51, I feel like everyone aside from MC's family is evil. All character I 1st thought was their friend turned out to be evil/betrayal/rapist. I have grown to like some characters only to know they were actually bad and a fate worse than death await them. MC is also very stupid and acts antagonistically to everyone annoying him. There's nothing to gain from acting as such aside from creating unnecessary enemies. The fact that he kills someone but feels nothing is also minus to me. But that's just me. No insult intended to the author.

grandpa is very supportive?

We decided to adopt a child since we found out last week that Elaine can't bear a child. So we both agreed on adopting one since both of us still wants a son. We visited a nearby manage called St. Gio's.