Chaos' Heir - Reviews

Vgood name mate

I don't know why I keep thinking of the Khan from Overgeared lol

It was quite a ride, 7/10 for me. The romance is nice but might frustrate you. The fight scenes are good, and the character development is fine, I guess. I don't like the current persona, but I can't do anything about that. All in all, if you're looking to pass the time with a nice novel, you can read this.

The plot is intriguing but the romance feels like the guy is trying to date every girl he tried to date in college

A better novel than most on this site but still gravely lacking:
1) Story proceeds at a snail pace, there are so many filler chapters (with the main character reaching the first level of cultivation at chapter 190)
2) The main character becomes progressively unlikeable (starts betraying his own race because he loves an alien girl)
3) Half the chapters are romance, I did not come here to read a romance story.
4) Cultivation levels are clear but applications of mana are confusing, there is  new entire systems of utilisation getting thrown to the reader at random with massive info dumps and repetitions.
Grammar is good but the story is so slow I can't recommend this to anyone. From chapter 100 to 200 there has barely been any development.

two years since i have read this. is this the dude who f*ck*d an alien??

"The aliens should try to live in the Slums," Khan snorted. "You can buy a house with twenty food cans, but you are better off stealing an empty one while the owners are working."

there's nothing fundamentally wrong with the romance in this novel. The author just spends too much time on it. The female love interests are all fine

Hello, author here. Thank you for having given my second novel a chance. I plan to update two chapters every day. Moreover, I always read the comments, so I will fix every error that you point out in less than a day.
Anyway, I hope you enjoy the story.

Preliminary 5 star review as I am a big fan of his other work Birth of the Demonic Sword. Will update review at 50+ chap . . . . . . . . . ..

Disclaimer: I have enjoyed this story and like the premise but this is a complaining review. I still highly recommend giving this a try. These are just the problems I think exist and they haven't stopped me from continuing to read this.

As I read this I come across a few critiques/personal opinions.
1. The human race is said to be spaceworthy and traveling to other planets, conquering or making alliances with other races. Yet throughout the story the scale never really feels like that is the case. It consistently feels like the only people in existence are the characters introduced 'on screen'. Ex. He is on a world where the race is said to have been in control of the entire planet and yet I never felt like there were more than a few dozen people living there. Most of the story takes place in training camps that barely seem to have any people.
2. His relationship with the alien woman, Liiza, has come to dominate at least half of the story and is tiring at this point to read about. It was interesting at first but now it is just repetitive. The story stopped being about the MC getting stronger and traveling the universe to find his enemy and now it's all about how he will do anything for his relationship. The relationship that multiple times in the story has been said to be 'toxic'.
3. I've noticed this in many stories. When an author wants to make his MC seem smarter or better they will make their superiors dumber or incompetent to lend credence to the MC. This happens here with the MC's military command. Someone in command should not be so flustered or easily persuaded by a teenage boy. Even if the said teenage boy has 'magical alien trauma' giving him OP powers and plot armor.

Omg a new novel from him i haven t even read a chapter and i still know its gonna be a great novel.
well points it is i guess ..............