Can You Keep A Secret? (Completed) - Reviews

Can You Keep A Secret? (Completed)
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I've gotta say, it's been long since I've seen such a good character description and reminiscent story. Keep it up author! Love your stories.?
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The story is sooo repetitive, always the same schema. 1st there is a problem, 2nd there is MC which everyone thinks of as an incapable fraud who cannot solve the problem, 3rd MC enrages the others even more, 4th MC slaps faces of enraged people by cheating with his library to solve the problem. Repeat this several times with different characters, settings and occupations, that's all till chapter 270...Characters are really shallow, even the MC lacks personality. He has a greedy personality, likes to slap faces and loves to teach his students. Other than that he lacks natural talent and is only omnipotent because of his cheating library, which is kinda sad. That's basically all you can say about him and no real characterdevelopment happened so far. The characters capabilities grow, but only because of his cheatcode and not because of experiences.The world and characters/animals lack descriptions. Often new characters/beasts and so on are only introduced with 1-2 sentences, so it's hard to get to love those faceless characters and plain settings.Certain parts of the story are lacking any logic. Sometimes the omnipotent MC deduces things so detailed, that I wonder why the surrounding characters didn't straight away burn him on the stakes because of witchcraft, but they just accept it with pale faces... Other times the timeline is totally messed up. Until chapter 270, 20 days passed and in this time he read millions of books, but if you run some numbers with #books read and time needed to flip a book, there is no way that could be right.TLDR: repetitive story with shallow characters/world and illogical parts.
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Great at the beginning. However, the last 10 chapters are not only short and filled with none sense, but translated poorly. Clearly not edited or checked for grammar or coherence. Not worth the read any more, which is disappointing. I really liked the story. Please get someone that actually cares to translate and edit the chapters.
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So about the empress................................................................................................................. does our boy hit that ??
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What is this Cliche emperor doing on the first page of daily updates? Has the WN level dropped so much? And another, stop creating the Bot and promote that cliché that is ugly.
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Just a copy of a different novel almost word for word guy tansmigrates has no talent and becomes blacksmith and forges his own body , plagiarism
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Interesting... Interesting... Interesting... Interesting... Interesting... Interesting... Interesting... Interesting... Interesting... Interesting... Interesting... Interesting... Interesting... Interesting... Interesting... Interesting...
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"The greatest weakness of this type of blade is that it requires constant maintenance. The grain patterns in the blade are not hammered out or manipulated by the Blacksmith, and thus it is not as strong of a blade as one that is pattern welded." Spoke the blacksmith.
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Arrrrr...
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[Echo Speed ​​Clone] - Aktif -
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