Burnouts - Reviews

I have read three chapters so far. (Sorry, I'm quite busy today.)Here's my review:Overall, this novel has a nice plot. Its concept is well thought and unique. For the story development, it seems smooth therefore I'll be giving this category five stars.When it comes to the writing quality there are a few minor errors but it doesn't affect the story that much.. Perhaps, proofreading will do the trick.Anyways, good luck and keep up the good work???

if you like low key protagonist then welcome abroad, the world building is good, but side characters are not so great, antagonist are good so read it

Very enjoyable. I didn't notice any flaws or grammatical errors in the translation. At least, not that I remember.The story seems to start off simple, but quickly grows in depth. Overall, it's a very enjoyable read, with many twists and turns.The author knows how to build suspense instead of annoyance, and I feel he truly is putting his heart into his craft.

Mood swings?

Anyways Archive is quite handy. She seems to naturally know where Aether hatchlings are located. It was mostly because of her that our Aether hatchling-consume-rate increased by threefolds. When I asked her how did she do that, her 'simple' reply was:

"Tatsuya is it true that you fought against multiples experimented shinobi when the other died , without any help you managed to kill them ?"

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

You'll never know if you don't go (go!)

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Eric felt it while Dylan radiated battle intent. This was a being like them with a unique ability. Even Eric felt excited. How strong are we compared to other people all over the world? Are we even ranked in the thousands?

SHOOM!

Hey guys author here,I don't have much experience in writing so if you have any suggestions or questions please let me know.Thanks for reading.