Bound by the Curse - Reviews

This is  a good story, but please update the previous chapters it's really sad that qidian has started it from chapter 138 ?                                      .

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The Good:  A good xianxia without any useless fluff for the most part.  Author puts in plenty of effort to keep the quality high and it shows!The Bad:  The cultivation levels are very hard to follow, I personally don't like it when I have to take a mental note of the levels because they are not intuitive.  A slow pace is good, but going too slow makes it a chore to keep up with.  I personally don't feel anything unique from the MC or the world, I feel like a plain character was placed in a generic xianxia world instead of building the world around the character.  Sorry if that doesn't make much sense.The Neutral:  While this novel doesn't try anything new, I feel like the author is aware of that and plays to its strengths making it a very solid novel amongst a sea of cultivation novels.  (Although the cultivation novel sea is many times smaller than the romance novel sea)

Too messy, after 50 chapters or so, the names, cultivation level, lifespan, etc is so random.

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Really loving what I've read so far. Especially love the character interactions and story building, can't wait to see where it'll go from here! Keep it up!

Interesting premise and I love the fact this kid is thrown into such a crazy world, but he is doing his best to make it through it all. I am happy the author is willing to put so much work into this one.

It has some good promise, and it has a nice twist on the cliche of a system making the mc op. Mainly just needs to work on making the chapters updates more reliably frequent.

Great start. The start reminds me of Rimuru before he got reincarnated just the difference that he didn't get Isekai'd and instead got a system. The pacing is alright. Not too fast nor too slow. The writing style can be improved. Having read so many stories with systems in it, I've become immune to it. So all in all, it depends on the rest of the plot. Novel Recommended.

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