Hey Author first I must say........You did a f-ing good job on this story its completly different from the others and I hope you write more in the future, I would love that. But since I respect all writers (even if they are sometimes idiots?), make your story grow, its good. Don't listen to the others that wanna bring you down and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.Sorry abou my grammar, I'm from Germany??PS: Pls write more often?