Black Magic: Write (COMPLETED) - Reviews

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Hmm. Rough. World building needs help, character building as well. A bit forced overall.Editing good, but needs more captivation to appeal to a larger audience.

It was really good until chapter 182 and on. I dropped it at 184. The tags romance/harem, idiot and only thinking with his little head should be added so people can avoid wasting time like me.

The name of the book should have been How to pick up 3 year old Chinese girls. It is especially interesting how this 23 year old man in a child's body makes the little girl kiss him by bribing her with candy.

Finally find it this novel so much frustration trying find this uhhhh... web novel fix the problem bug certain novels not popping up correctly ? I could just be me I don’t care but forget lol I read doomsday reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

The first novel that made me really laugh. I recommend this to everyone. The part where everyone arrived in the mage's room and just stared at themselves was the best

Webnovel needs more writers like you, you made me cry and it takes a lot out of someone to make me cry. The synopsis is on point it takes a lot out of a father to do what Matthew did and your vocabulary is on key so keep up the good work!!!

The door shut again and I was alone again. My room was so void of personality, a sinking feeling consumed me every time I was in it.

"You sure? It's going to be fun, you know?"

When I'm done I put the blade back to the same drawer where I first saw it. It was one of the princess' tools for her suicidal attempt. I must admit that its impressively sharp, maybe sharper than the last samurai sword that I held in the modern era.