Beyond the Shattering - Reviews

As I'm not that great in writing I will just say what I think is annoying for a reader. This (Mom:,Dad:) it's annoying, you can improve by getting rid of it and use something else that will help readers to identify who speaks at the moment. That's all, I'm looking forward for your improvement.

Did the translation stop again? It's getting ridiculous. One of the best wuxia webnovel isn't getting the attention it deserves! I would use machine translation, but that won't do this story justice.

The only major complaint I have is the translation quality specifically random missing words. Having all the words is kind of important...Otherwise, it is somewhat similar to the Legendary Mechanic, but with a magic focus so far. Looks like there is a decent number of chapters already out from looking at the raw.

Interesting works, I like the details of the characters and setting also the character in your thumbnail looks striking to Joker, I'm new to this site by any chance it's not a fanfic? Also ghost hunters is a fun idea, not to mention they also have guilds, also I'm positive this is a war between the ghost/demons and the hunters,  the part where the large demon came out the portal was funny to me because of the reactions of the 5 leaders, the story is also pretty apocalyptic.

Truly gold will aways shine haiSaw it on my recommended page, thought the title/summary was interesting. Read the reviews and most of them said the book was baller, read the first word of the first chapter and that was it, didnt stop until the last word of the last chapter. Might have taken more than an hour but i do not regret, Hope you don’t either

"Step into my parlor, said the spider to the birdie," A female voice called out to me. "Or as your friends call you in meatspace... Yata."

Then came the Marines Following Garp was 3 teens who introduced themselves as Borsalino, Kuzan and Sakazuki they were dressed in uniform and looked disciplined.

Thomas:hindi na ako magtataka hon,syempre masasarap ang niluluto ng mga Chief natin, galing ibat-ibang bansa pa ang mga yan,

"No, there's no—wait, did you just admit to breaking into my room?" Night can't help the fake startled tone in his voice. He was trying to incite the guild master by focusing on the wrong things.

Pain is love.

Ok, so this is a new novel and I know and I will improve my work, so I request you to please support my work and please leave your suggestions reviews and comments so I can improve my story.Thank you

I'm the creator, so this is 100% biased.