Beyond the scars! - Reviews

This dude got us hooked on this like a drug then  he stopped updating on it letin us wait patiently or not maybe dropped idk.... Tho overall grate read and other autors should  learn from this story writing  for future its an amazin novel or this 13 chapters with nice story and amazing pace... So im rating 5 stars even if it might be dropped  cheers guys and see you if autor ever decides to update this one :)

Great start. Good story building at first. But as story progresses MC becomes more arrogant and idiotic. he starts doing idiotic things when he doesn't have power to protect himself.

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Surprisingly Good. I admit that I kinda didn't liked the story first, but the following chapter really got my interest. Although the story little slow it has great potential.Mainly the chakra and the elemental powers. Its fascinating. That's why my expectations for this story is higher as well other works. Good Luck!

very good startwaiting for more updates to decide how this story will play Author release more chapters...........................................................................

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So now we need to pay to read the chapters? Too bad for throne of magical arcana or others novel here. This was quite a nice story but it will end here for me.

"Sean? How did you get so old?" At this question, Sean stopped and turned to look at Emma.

The lines seemed to burn the air like pyrography on wood before they began to pulse rhymically for a few moments.

My poor bald principal realizes my sudden attack as he pushes me away. "Clarissa, now's not the time for playing games."

"I told you, I'm not joking around" he proudly said. "By the way pops! This is the woman I really liked and love Ms. Cinderella Bathala" and he introduced het with a boastful look and voice like he won something big at an event.

" Dari mana saja kamu?!!! " Bentak Raymond kepada Avian.