Beyond the Pitch - Reviews

Very poorly written story… it jumps from one topic to another… very confusing

(Will alter if needed)This story idea seems a little stupid. I'm desperate so I'll try it but if I don't follow up it wasn't good.. . . . . .

Ohhh yes daddy likes that so give me. Oh and author you better make the Mc at least not a v#rgin and i hate v#rgen Mc's and at least make a humanoid beast harem cuz I think some of us here are waiting for beast s#x

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This is an interesting novel! Thank God I found it. Phew! Thank you for this wonderful novel and I'll continue reading it just like "wish of the dragon" it's an interesting novel so as this one. So I'm glad to find it. ? keep up the great work!??

I don't know for sure if this book will stay with me ike some of the others do, hopefully quality and frequency doesn't drop. Good enough for now.

MISUK: What!!???

"How did he hear us through the door?"

It only lasted in a minute before the disturbance settled down. The Avraerion turned back to their normal appearance, they understood what Aeyldarr told them that they could also transform into birds. In the end, they decided to call that form as Caladrius.

"OK let this be fine, who is she, where did you met her? and how did you proposed her

Only shooting stars

''lalu dari mana kamu tahu kalau rendra sekolah disini,hah?''. Tanya sarah dengan kesal.