BETA - Reviews

Beautiful and very interesting story. Cant wait to read the second part

Honestly, between the inaacuracies in the way certain weapons are used in real life and the book, along with IET pretty boring tournament arc history, this book really is not that engaging. For example, everything so far and implied for the future by the title is going to be combat tournament arcs. No offense but tournament arcs are usually the worst part of any light novel. Authors seem to stick to the formula and i cannot imagine why an author like IET would limit themselves to a story like that, especially when they describe thw characters using weapons in ways that the weapons are not used. The best example is the Halberd scene where IET describes the warrior stabbing with the point and swinging with the bladed end. This is not how Halberds are used. Its like saying someone shooting a handgun is supposed to hold it sideways like a gangster its inproper and inaccurate. Halberds are held with two hands and the staff end is used to parry and prod until an opening is made where the combatant can bring the axe/hammer end down. Put it quite simply the book doesn’t seem all that intresting 42 chapters in so im dropping This is a 2 and a 1/2 star book but I have to give two 5 stars for update stability and translation quality so tale the score as you will.

This is the most smoked story I've read so far, everything moves so fast that it gives me pain just thinking about it, but for people who like fanfics with invincible protagonists, it's fine.

An excellent and good novel and a novel that is not without the latest.  But what I hate about the novel is Sera's character.  You know that your whole life is suffering and suffering and no one at that time can help you.  He's just watching you ache, your skin sloughing off, your bones severing, and he's waiting for your strength to wake up.  What if it takes so long for him to wake up.  I don't see the difference between her and that crazy doctor.  Especially when you wear that cute and sincere smile that disgusts me

The first novel I completed and it's entirety. Don't regret a second of it.----------------------------------------------------------------------------

interesting novel, with slow pace, fleshing to see an mc who is not op, but with all good things comes bad things, the mc is personality is pretty bland, he is not completely cold blooded but he is cold in a way, he doesn't seem to have personal feelings what so ever, he is mostly calculating situation almost like a machine and human hybrid, he is bullied but he doesn't seem to feel any anger nor care which is weird, the mc has no magic, just minions, but in the world he is in there are people who can avoid death, tho he has enchanted things but he personally isn't that strong without sacrificing his memories further more turning into emotionless pupet.though it is a little boring I'm gonna keep reading cause why not,finish what I have started.

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Alright I haven't read all the chapters out rn but I have to say I really like it so far. The characters are interesting to read about, and aren't flat 2d characters with no personality. The story isn't boring or longwinded, and can still keep my attention for chapters at a time. I haven't seen an obvious grammar or spelling mistake so far. The creme de la creme of this story for me is the monster mc I just love that sort of thing! Keep up the great work author!!!  q(≧▽≦q)

Kind of lack luster. I got through 35 chapters and  nothing really stands out that makes me think this is a good book. He gets powerful really fast, which is fine because it is explained, but he can break into a highly secured facility guarded by around a hundred people who have trained their who lives, that are incapable of even slowing him down for a couple of minutes. He conveniently gets connections with people with powerful secret techniques that he can conveniently use even when no one else his level can use that shows power above his level with no draw backs and has many stages that will make him even more powerful when unlocked. He gets a (presumably) god powered equipment conveniently picked up off of some guy, who comes from a group that really should not have been strong enough to get it in the first place (and no one seems to figure out it was them despite them losing several people to gain this equipment). Even if it makes a little sense, some action go too far away from common sense and it is way too frequent.Everything is just working out for the protagonist too well. I would not complain if the book actually went somewhere with a sub goal other than just get stronger. Getting stronger is a means to achieve a goal, but should not be the goal itself.

read over 150 chapters in MTL.. the story is kinda meh.. martial arts here tends to be kinda like "martial arts master" with no qi n all but with fighting concept n all that.. but it's very terrible in comparison.. it was pretty solid n clearly mentioned over there but here it's just put out badly.. n the way it's progressing it seems like author has messed up the power systems n wants to bring back the normal cultivation systems.. story is kinda fine but as a cultivation/martial arts specific novel I'd expect it's power system to be good or atleast clear n not keep changing since it wasn't planned properly

It's a serene, beautiful yet captivating story about love...the author makes the boys' struggle against fate across different lifetimes feel real even though it is a very out-worldly concept...Great and relatable characters...beautifully sculpted. The first few chapters are a little confusing on what is going on, probably because of the long paragraphs. Story's a hidden gem...waiting to be read.

I LOVE this, I think it’s great, and cool of you to continue the story that you love. (Even if it couldn’t be finished)Definitely A To Go Book if you Need more of the Harry Potter World, or vampires.I would like for this to continue, and it will definitely be One of my favorites.Specially since i love the Harry Potter world!!