Beastborne - Reviews

Can we get the Clever protagonist tag removed? The main character is an idiot and ends up having to use a super power just to have a single clever thought. Has turned into a really boring 'horror' novel.

Good book but garbage translotor with no updates/irregular updates. Good book but garbage translotor with no updates/irregular updates. Good book but garbage translotor with no updates/irregular updates. Good book but garbage translotor with no updates/irregular updates. Good book but garbage translotor with no updates/irregular updates. Good book but garbage translotor with no updates/irregular updates. Good book but garbage translotor with no updates/irregular updates.

Writing is very good and I really like the idea behind the novel. But the length of chapters is very short however they are getting better..

good read, but very hard to follow. would suggest getting proofreader to help, way to many errors. but overall good job hopefully you start updating again soon

Amazing honestly, can't get enough of the book, from the start to where I stopped, I have always been on the edge of my seat.your writing is so descriptive and very fluent, minimal grammatical error as well. I'd recommend it to anyone really

This was no joke he was already at the Emperor realm. Before this, they thought he would at least be peak phase Master realm or initial stage of Saint realm. No matter how much freking monster he could be he would still need resources to go forward in the realms in cultivation. Shen's rival was at most peak Saint realm but Shen himself is in Emperor. (Between them there is a difference between two entire realms.)

"What is it?" She asked without turning to look at me.

We were in the yard behind our house. Mom had left to run errands. Maxine was watching from my windowsill and Lamlan had claimed a rock next to the wall that was positioned in the sun for most of the morning. The day before, he had discovered a second rock that was warmed by the sun in the afternoon. Tibi and Ulnar were eating breakfast without a care for the disgruntled 3-year-old.

- Hey everyone! I know how hard it is, but you all need to follow us and understand what will happen. - He said interrupting the silence. - Firstly, let's start with a introduction. My name is Sypher, I'm the captain of the group 32, or in another words, all of you. All of you already saw the commander, so we must wait for her orders, she is the one that will explain everything, I'm just her assistant.

JK: Yes hyun I'm fine. Is anyone not hungry cause I am. Let's go eat somewhere.

After holding their hands for a while, Ranata slowly crept his hand up and moved upward along the arms of the girls in a spiraling motion. He tastes the sensation of their soft skin and their warmth along the way of his movement, until finally he reached their shoulder. After he skillfully lowering the sleeves of their robe so that their bare shoulders can be seen, he rub Althea's right shoulder and Lumina's left shoulder while smiling with satisfaction to them. Seeing his smile, they felt utterly happy as they know that their Master is attracted to their bodies, albeit still feeling a bit shy, with an extra anticipation towards what their Master will do next.

(Test A2: Mana usage and movement. It is a test to see the Mana to movement ratio of the subject and to see if it has any problems moving.