hello don, i read ur hwbs ,its awsome,i want u to read " the protagonist are killed by me" and make some novel taking inspiration from it, i bet u coul make a gr8 novel out of it, the original has good concept but not gr8 execution
Overall, not a bad novel. There is a little bit of NTR but it's not excessive. Personally, it was too much for my tastes. Writing, characters, and setting are all quite good. Some decisions about the characters are very questionable.
I found this story coincidentally and thought I give it a shot. It has a good story line and I like the characters. I can see the author is trying not to follow the usual stereotypes what makes everything interesting. There are just a few updated but until now I really like it.
"W-well this kind of matter shouldn't be joked about, and you should scold your grandpa for making such jokes. You two better be off now, the cafeteria just opened."