Astral Pet Store - Reviews

The only thing good about this novel is the idea of the plot that's it as for oyher aspects read below.
Main character -Is stupid. eg-He bought cure for his mother then forgot to give her.
Story-Full of holes . eg- there are so many cultivators but none can judge others cultivation level its just you can fly yuo are a titled one.
Other charecters-they try to act cunning but are forced by author act out the face slapping routine that to not properly.
SO PLEASE AVOID READING IT UNLESS YOU ARE A AUTHOR WHO WANT'S TO LEARN HOW NOT TO WRITE A NOVEL

I read it and it is actually pretty good the main character's personality is a little shameless with him stealing from other powerful beings with his system and you can find Pikachu in the novel.

Me seeing book centered on pets:

The same story that you can read on a large number of Chinese novel.
I honestly don't like the author's writing's style.
Not worth reading...

im reading this book and I feel like the reviews aren't accurate this book is very cliché mc seems to be a masochist also might be retarded I was really hoping for it to be good since  love monster taming novels but this is bad tbh its not interesting feels like a cultivation novel without the excitement and a lot of retards including mc

*coughs confidently*
This the original by me :

I want to be the very best,
Like no one ever was.
To tame them is my real test,
To train them is my cause!

(I will travel across the land,
Searching far and wide.
Each Astral Beast to understand
The power that's inside!)

Astral Beast!!!
Gotta tame em' all!

It's you and me,
I know it's my destiny!

Astral Beast!!!

Oh, you're my best friend,
In a world we must defend!

Astral Beast!!
Gotta tame em' all!

(A heart so true,
Our courage will pull us through!)

You teach me and I'll teach you,

Astral Beast!!!
Gotta tame em' all!

Gotta tame em' all!

Every challenge along the way,
With courage I will face!
I will battle every day,
To claim my rightful place!

Come with me, the time is right,
There's no better team with a system!!
Arm in arm, we'll win the fight,
It's always been our dream!

Astral Beast!!!
Gotta tame em' all!

It's you and me,
I know it's my destiny!

Astral Beast!!

Oh, you're my best friend,
In a world we must defend!

Astral Beast!!!
Gotta tame em' all!

(A heart so true,
Our courage will pull us through!)

You teach me and I'll teach you,

Astral Beast!!!
Gotta tame em' all!

Gotta tame em' all!

Gotta tame em' all!

Gotta tame em' all!

Gotta tame em' all!

Astral Beast!!!
Gotta tame em' all!

It's you and me,
I know it's my destiny!

Astral Beast!!!

Oh, you're my best friend,
In a world we must defend!

Astral Beast!!!
Gotta tame em' all!

(A heart so true,
Our courage will pull us through!)

You teach me and I'll teach you,

Astral Beast!!!
Gotta tame em' all!

Gotta tame em' all!
ASTRAL BEAST!!!

- BY  LORD_OF_ORIGIN

Great story and RAW LINKS here
https://m.biquge.com.cn/book/42227/
thnx me in prayers
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Let’s be honest, this novel is a unique novel but not the rare one. I like this kind of pet-shop-cultivation-novel but later I had gradually became so disappointed when I read the raw.

The tittle novel is “Astral Pet Shop” but this novel hardly mentioned the development of the shop, they didn’t even sell the astral pet but only selling food pet and training customer’s astral pet. That’s all.

What’s about the mc? Geeeh, mc is arrogant and a bit madman. Instead how to develop his own shop, mc is rather provoked every big families. He is smart but no wise.

He chose to enter the outside secret realm with the risk of one time death when the system already provides him with many secret realms with endless death. The only thing he need is a little bit time, he just need to wait patiently and accumulation of money from shop but he ends up running into the greater risk and provoked some big figures.


Seriously, the more i read the more disappointed i became and gradually i lose interest then I drop it.

The concept itself was very good and unique but author made this novel to became so cliche.

The side characters were even more worst then the mc’s.

Overall rate: 5/10

Brain Dead Mc to protect plot Check
Stupid Coincidences to protect plot Check
Plot Armor Check


To protect the stupidly designed plot, the author makes MC takes the most stupid decisions. It is one of the worst Chinese Web novels I have ever read. The "Original" structure is somehow interesting, other than that it is rubbish. I read 600 some chapters and I regret terribly. Author forgots what had he wrote in one chapter before, no flow, no cohesion.
Fence Sitters are brain deader than the Mc. They talk rubbish to show Mc strong, cool and intersting, but in reality Mc is just that.

Read with caution.

This novel is acceptable till 100 chapters. After that the charecters become more dumb, foolish and brainless. They cant even see the very obvious things. Those are just one dimensional charects created to cover up the fact that the story is very lacking in the aspects of creativity and good plot. The MC becomes a very lazy idiot - here this author tried to imitate the "monster pet evolution" book but  ended up creating a useless low IQ trash MC. If you want to read it because you like the first 80-90 chapter, i suggest you dont but You will be very dissapointed if you keep reading. I am saying it out of personal experience (i read the remaining chapters in raw)

I read until chapter 12 and I couldn't go over it, the characters are just annoying, like all of them, some of which, if were my irl friends, they would get a punch in the gut, like I can't say too much about it since I didn't even read half of the available chapters, but like with this first impression that I had access to, it's not that good of a read

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