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Came back here to comment about how badass the heroine Agent Nova is! I am loving how strong women are portrayed in this story, which is rare thank youu

Overall it's pretty decent, with fun and likable characters and a somewhat interesting world. Though the dialogue feels bad since they talk exposition most of the time, it is still an enjoyable read.There are a few issues with the writing, as there are sometimes missing or misplaced commas, periods, apostrophes, and etc. Along with some missing words.Though it's not a big deal as I can still understand it, it does ruin the flow and takes you out of the book.I recommend using grammarly and a bit of proofreading.

it's hard for me to read webnovels that involve the mc being a Buddhist cuz (correct me if I'm wrong) unlike other cultivation, buddhist cultivation is solely based on belief. I don't understand how MCs can level up cultivation and skills with their system that are based on belief without having any.

Author here! Another shameless review ;)Hopefully I can live up to my own set of high expectations. I would love to write more and will continue to work on this novel arduously. I also have another novel that I will be posting updates for on my Pateorn account. It is about half way done.https://***.patreon.com/kalrock

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She stopped glazing hastily at her right hand seeing that Sarang and Chinhwa had gone missing into the deep moving crowd as people passed by her like a gaping hole....