animefam - Reviews

quick good read

Interesting and captivating!

don't mind me i am just here for the yanderes and dont drop it

Author keeps giving the MC abilities that he clearly does not have, it's super stupid and annoying. MC is very stupid, and keeps making weird decisions. Plot is kinda forced, and MC is not allowed to change the timeline, or someone will smite him or something idiotic like that.It's very clear to see from here that the author actually has no understanding of Marvel, or Slime.

he was overpowered from start there should be some struggle

Author is racist, in the second and third chapter there were some thugs who 'happened' to all be black. When Ron (the MC) confronts them, he calls them "Slaves

IT BEEN FOREVER SENSE U PUT ANY CHAPTERS OUT!! R U GOING TO COME BACK OR NOT?? IF NOT CAN U JUST TAKE UR BOOK DONE PLEASE BECAUSE I REALLY DONT WANT MY HOPES TO BE SO HIGH ALL THE TIME WAITING FOR U!! I LOVE THIS BOOK AND WANT TO SEE IT CONTINUE BUT OBVIOUSLY SOMETHING IS GOING ON AND IF UR NOT GOING TO KEEP IT GOING THEN JUST GET RID OF IT PLEASE!! DONT MIND THE CAPS MY PHONE IS BROKE BUT I REALLY LOVE THIS BOOK AND WANT IT TO KEEP GOING!!!

36 (2002/07/30)

Suddenly when i was going back to my class (it was a stairpathway) my leg just somehow slipped and i was about to fall but to my amazement!! i felt some hand on my waist (grabing my waist tightly) an air of love and romance was just travelling .the one who held me was none other than rishi. His nose rested upon mine and his shrewd eyes which was like a spider web enough for me to get killed were looking in my eyes. Then an unpleasant air broke which made us realise that it is public place and anyone could catch up with slight hasitation , i made my eyes looks down and i came out from his warm arms which wrapped me.

50- a large suction force pulled Akira upwards and threw him back down onto the tube. Akira watched the walls of the silver tube and realised his butt didn't feel as painful as it did the last time he slid through it. Maybe Inami made some adjustions the last time he came? At fifty-six seconds, Akira slid into the light and landed on his dollar chair at his study table. He turned around in time to see the slide contraption folding itself back into the ceiling board just as a knock came from his bedroom door.

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"Please accompany me to the kitchen," Qingling begged.