Great premise with an interesting vibe. I feel like walking on the downtown street trying to hunt vampires. The writing style was a little bit paragrapic like you found in the novel. It was not bad, but I preferred to get nice rows of sentences in chapters. But all my preferences and writing styles were quite clear enough for me. The plot was interesting if you like cultist and vampire-hunting vibes, from outcast to hero. MC was quite on the cool side. I'm sure it would be great for anyone who is interested in watching Quick Draw Wild West. Good pacing and good world-building. Nice works. Keep it up, author!
