Alpha's Dark Desires - Reviews

Great, i like the story.  >>My Girl is mine, don't forget

the plot is unique it's a plus point for this but I wonder why in chapter 2 it use 'I' but later use 3'rd person POV? Also simple suggestion since I read this in app, the paragraph made is too long. It's quite uncomfortable reading it so please cut down the paragraph into short one. Grammar is ok it can be edited but please try not to only add 'He asked', 'he said', 'he answered' u can use variety to conversation as not to make it boring. Keep it up u got potential!

One of the best novel available in webnovel. mc is character design very good unlike other novels. Even after knowing he was op he stll act  like normal person not like ****ty MC's who goes to annihilate whole family for simple reasons. So far no silkpant appered . No clishe.. a heart warming + horrer(small) story about daily life of a monk. Try it..Ps: chances of good novels selected is low. Let's ask buddha to help to select the novel. Namo amitabha ?

So, I've been seeing authors doing this, so I might as well do it myself, I mean why not? Anyways, I'm very insecure so if you're too harsh with your critique I'm going to go cry in a corner. Nah but for real though, I hope everyone enjoys the story, and if you don't then I hope you manage to find something better out there!

there is someone missing here... thestatguy... summoning thestatguy, come here fast?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Pretty solid Start so far. Just need more chapters and this will be a pretty decent start for a new book. Cant wait for the next few chapters that are coming So we can see what his class will be.

This book preview was so great. It honestly still makes me sad that it wasn’t picked and its been 7 months. Like damn I can’t remember yesterday’s breakfast but I still miss this book. ?

k imma say this straight If he is a billion times more talented than average people. Even when people take 9999 years to cultivate to x he takes 5 minutes so.... All imma say is you've underestimated his cultivation speed.

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this book is good if not AI translate it would on top 10