Alpha's rejected mate - Reviews

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Not gonna lie its quite lack luster. Boring                                                                                                  

Fast start+ Clear development+ Cool system+ Space orcs - dude write about orcs! space orcs rule the galaxy. The story is cool. don't drop it.

Basically, this is what would “realistically” happen if weebs were summoned to a magic world.                                                      

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Was good at the start but now it’s all just mc making harem and basically all just fan service

I have been serching for a novel like this one, where everyone is transmigate to another wolrd and became lords, without counting that stupid translated novel that same times apper. And the book is very well write, the caracter desing and the world background is also good and the development of the story is very good compering whith thous stupid chinese novels. I belive that this novel as great potential to even go against the novel about the desort lord that has been on the leader bords for same time.

pretty good.  It's the time skip that I appreciate the most.  Stories happen through the club anyway.  That's why time skips are essential to keep the league as alive as possible.  We know that MC trains a lot, but we see more of his social side. I think it is a good choice, it keeps the novel alive. Please keep writing.

She then logout and started to get ready for school .Here Sid just came after his morning walk when he got notification.

"Do you Luna Uchiha swear to uphold our values and protect the Pack above all else? Swear to look down on prejudice formed by strength and fight for those weaker than ourselves?"

I conclude with stress, "If you care about your bones then vacant the seats...". Within a fraction of second Ben turns back, see something and murmurs, " William let's go back. Stuart & the others are there. They are asking us to get back." Then he drags William with him & goes back. We are quite satisfied with our victory & grin at each other.