Alinal: the fall of vola

I enjoyed it.                                                                                                                                            

Not gonna lie im kinda surprised about how few reviews this novel has and i think you should read it if you like game/mmo  novels HOWEVERyou should be warned, its one of those mmorpg novels where the game is something more than just a game eg something from the game can be used outside etc. most close comparisons would probably be novels like "guild wars" and "shuras wrath"if you care about game balance you are gonna have a field day. all titles and unique things are hilariously broken. anywayi cant complain about writing or updates, mostly typos updates are pretty consistent so +1 from herethe story, there is some things which i dont really like, however they are personal preferences so i cant really hammer the author for that (mostly cultivators and swords) the development is pretty fluid and my biggest gripe is the huge amount of time spent in the desolate world/realm? and the short time between powerups, you dont really get a feel for how strong he really is. personally i wouldnt mind a slower burn with more detailed actions and descriptions. but still good +1 hereCharacters are excellent, i expected nothing and got a pretty good return. the cast we have some background on is really quite likeable, has flaws and strong points, sure it aint no shakespeare but is really quite good for a free webnovel. funnily enough i find the cast compelling enough for me to overlook my bias against swords and cultivators. the author has a good kind of eccentric way of writing, you can call it a bit edgy, but i find it quite compelling speeches specifically. combined with some pretty wholesome intimate parts. all in all i really like the characters +1the world is probably the least developed both in and out of vr it does the job alright, but has minimal descriptions it is only 60 chapters so far, so take it with a grain of salt, packing character development and world building into 60 chapters is gonna be a challenge for even the best of writers suggestions/preferences as stated before i wouldnt mind the novel to burn a bit slower, things happen pretty fast i enjoy the details and descriptions of the world around him alot. a bit more world building and you are golden. i would say more chapters but on this point us readers will probably never be satisfied.best of luck with your novel-88

Very nice, might be similar to an emperors self cultivation, but its better written, better expressed.Enjoyed much more than the "original".

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One of my favorite novels on the site. I decided to read it on a whim due to its name and was pleasantly surprised. The writing quality is pretty good with only a few mistakes and such. The stability of updates is the only thing I'm stuck on, but that's just because I want to read more of the story. Story development is really amazing and its nice how they haven't revealed what happens in the end yet. Character design is also amazing and I love the chemistry between the characters. World building is also really amazing with many unique tropes instead of just using overused cliches. Overall, amazing novel, highly recommend.

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