Aiming For The Crown

I see a lot of bs reviews on here I am half way through and honestly it’s a relaxing read but has a lot of issues.•Barely any character development•romance tag but is extremely rushed with no buildup •world building is bare minimum•Side characters come and go with zero backstory.•Zero conflict for a world that is life or death. An MC that’s OP is fine but what’s the point when every event that happens just gets walked through like a typical Tuesday. It’s an enjoyable read if your just trying to pass the time but I’ve got to say this is definitely not as good as ”people” are making it out to be.

I have only just started the story, but I can’t wait to find out the mystery of their past. It is nerve wracking because they are so innocent and nice that I feel like they will get hurt.

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The spelling made it hard to read. I couldn’t continue on. You misspelled words like “Athlete” and “nurse”. I know some people have trouble spelling, but you might benefit from an editor.

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