Adeeba: His sunshine - Reviews

A bad-ass heroine? count me in, this story is interesting and keeps me getting hooked, gonna continue reading this hehe

Way too many grammatical errors and awkward sentence structure. This novel needs a lot of editing. Character-wise, it is kinda cliche but something that can be easily pardoned. The only redeeming feature of the story is the plot. It is kinda interesting to see a system that revolves around Greek mythology.

I HATE THE AUTHOR OF THIS BOOK BECAUSE HE NEVER FINISH ANY OF HIS NOVEL✌️I HATE THE AUTHOR OF THIS BOOK BECAUSE HE NEVER FINISH ANY OF HIS NOVEL✌️I HATE THE AUTHOR OF THIS BOOK BECAUSE HE NEVER FINISH ANY OF HIS NOVEL✌️I HATE THE AUTHOR OF THIS BOOK BECAUSE HE NEVER FINISH ANY OF HIS NOVEL✌️

Concept is pretty good, the idea of taming devine beasts to survive the end and them all being girls would be fun but only if they are strong enough to do what needs to be done and not just glorified pretty girls.

more please really potential here and a good idea for a fanfic

Good novel, with an interesting premise. The only problem is that the book is very hard to read for a lot of it due to terrible grammar. In one chapter there were only 9 paragraphs without any mistakes. If you can't slog through that, then don't read this book.

petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

after all the beautiful synopsis about cultivation in mundane activity, turns out just another system. why all those cultivation extreme importan if there is system anyway?

this needs a comedy tag.before this was dropped several months ago by another tl'er  it was a really entertaining novel. the main story took a bit to pick up but you didnt get the feeling that you were reading useless fillers like in some other novels.this is a really nice silly/amusing novel to try out and if they dont pick it up then allow the former tl'er to start it again... or, you know... invite them to join you.

I’ll give five stars for being able to write a book!

As if woken up from the dreamy weather, Egon could not help but retort coldly, "Lady, I'm beginning to think you enjoy our misery."

"Don't worry about them, master and please be safe where ever you are going. I would have asked to come together but I know that I will only be a hindrance." Valera said ashamed of herself.