Address Me With Your Name - Reviews

So I'll just summarize everything here.1. Remember to stick to only one tense. It takes practice, and I still make tense shifts by mistake.2. Make characters consistent.3. Learn the art of description-- telling and showing. There are lots of guides in the internet.And above everything else!Never stop writing! Just don't stop writing. Once you stop, you really won't improve, so Don't. Stop. Writing.That's all~!

This is a amazing book i love the system and how it cant tell you stuff tell it finds out it self and how he uses knowledge from his past like to help himself

at first,  it good and all but start at chapter 41, it LITERALLY gi down hill! too much mistake. After rework mabye i wilk consider reading it again

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MTL translation with a few edits.I expected better.

Speed: 150

Class Skills: [Archer {Passive} Exp (0/100)] [Animal Lover {Passive}]

"Apa kamu suka aku?" tanyanya pelan.

She started thinking..; Herself in a modern dress in an ancient palace they must be thinking that she likes to expose her body! Still enjoying this "dream".

GP- 25

He went to the hospital daycare to see how the baby was doing. He saw a couple of police officers carrying a baby in their arms while holding a couple of baby toys as they tried to play with the baby. One of the cops saw him and recognized who he was. "Mr. Anthony Stark?" inquired by the cop as he slowly approaches him.

An interesting idea, although it is almost completely removed from the shadow slave, but I will not condemn it. The only thing is a lot of awards to the hero.