Abyss Progenitor - Reviews

So, I read your story and it was nice...

Well either this is a rip off or the actual novel off it, but there is a manga which has the exact same concept and even storyline. The manga itself has trash translation and it‘s full of clichés. For example he gets a new reward—> face slap someone bc they don‘t believe him. Same goes for his occupation, he is a delivery boy but everyone underresimates him bc of that so he always face slaps someone by showing his car/entreprise that he recieved as a reward

It is a really good story. It is a one of a kind story where mc is not strong but a cripple instead. It's unlike other cultivation novels and mc is not arrogant(or can't be arrogant cause his identity might get blown) and just wants to live a peaceful life

When are you goin going to continue  or make something new?

It was comforting to have someone who believed me. I didn't see Tamon or Kiyote all day which was strange. Uki-chan leaned in closer and rested her head against my shoulder.

The kind of power Shirou had displayed back then, it was enough for Yamamoto to inwardly despair. However, one observation at least managed to relieve him.

"Excellent! If you'd kindly grasp my arm, I'll aparate to Diagon Alley , along the way I'll explain some more things to you ."

Yuse was too busy imagining the size of the candy.

player character and the NPC panel. At the same time, he connected the

Never!       Never!         Never!

Shameless self-review. Peak fiction for cultured people∼ (Also tricked you with a spoiler tag for no reason XD)                             

very awesome i like the way of your narrating i love this novel hope you'll upload some more chapters 5 star from me