Abyss Draconis - Reviews

Fell in love with the characters

chapter 11, 12, 13, 14, 15 coming up? pls pls

No Yandere Tag? Such a dissapointment, but i will read, coz u are a legend and i really love your writing in 'The Conqueror Path'.I hope i can see the end of you work

Goddamn. What a story. I don't even know where to begin. Character depth and world building are first class. Story progression is well balanced, not too fast to prevent any real depth from existing and not too slow to make the reader bored of it. The author really gives the story space to breathe. The main character is a wonderful piece of work. He is ruthless  and intelligent but more than that, he is multi-dimensional which makes it easier to empathize with him. He makes mistakes and learns from them, and is one of the most human representations of an MC I've ever read. This novel is captivating and gripping even though it starts out slow at first. I would seriously recommend for anyone, regardless of your poison.

Boring, dumb, slow, i've read 30 chapters and the mc still doesn't know how to use his powers, i'm guessing his power is to be lucky? but he doesn't really get any lucky breaks and so far we've seen 2 horny guys who've awakened powerful talents hit on his friend(girl) the girl isn't even interested in him and her parents are super powerful, why does he need to save her from horny guys lol also his little sister who's 5'2" at 12 and Super beautiful is a bro-con doesn't help make the story any more interesting,  30 chapters in and all that happened is that he awakened

I cannot go to school today"Said little Peggy Ann McKay."I have the measles and the mumps,A gash, a rash and purple bumps.My mouth is wet, my throat is dry.I'm going blind in my right eye.My tonsils are as big as rocks,I've counted sixteen chicken pox.And there's one more - that's seventeen,And don't you think my face looks green?My leg is cut, my eyes are blue,It might be the instamatic flu.I cough and sneeze and gasp and choke,I'm sure that my left leg is broke.My hip hurts when I move my chin,My belly button's caving in.My back is wrenched, my ankle's sprained,My 'pendix pains each time it rains.My toes are cold, my toes are numb,I have a sliver in my thumb.My neck is stiff, my voice is weak,I hardly whisper when I speak.My tongue is filling up my mouth,I think my hair is falling out.My elbow's bent, my spine ain't straight,My temperature is one-o-eight.My brain is shrunk, I cannot hear,There's a hole inside my ear.I have a hangnail, and my heart is ...What? What's that? What's that you say?You say today is .............. Saturday?G'bye, I'm going out to play!

Some part of the content seems to be.. plagiarized from some other novel (the part about policewoman and dead driver)?Other than that, it seems to be a harem. And it develops very unnaturally at that. He met a policewoman who didn't seem like an easy pick. When she invited him to be her training coach to a gym, they only started & acted as friends. 5 chapters later they kiss and she says stuff like she'll do whatever he decides and that she's on his side and he suddenly acts as if it's already his decided wife. Like.. what the, where's the development? The girls in the other world are also EASY: first meetings and their cheeks are already red, they admire him, fall in love and would probably have nothing against being banged by MC. Oh and by the way, his only company in the other world are so far 3 girls and 0 boys. There is that male servant, a senior brother, a master, or that beggar who disappeared, but they don't accompany him in his daily life. Other guys are portraited as enemies- be it pig demon or some h*rny bullies.At least it's not a world of zombie apocalypse he's switching to, to build his harem and b*ng women he saved left and right which is the case for other novels in this genre (e.g. "I Have a Mansion in a Post-Apocalyptic World"). But in my opinion it's only slightly better, mostly due to absence of s*x, r*pe and rac*sm (am at chapter 66). But author often mentions how big of a beauty some girl is, her eyes, her face, her figure, her clothes. That's a red flag... As for harem, it's pretty much 1 woman in real world, 2 women in other world, that's 3 for now. Another brothel girl randomly inviting him to give him happiness, plus some other random, side chicks that would want him to be their boyfriend.

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The manga for a beginner is a hard thing so I appreciate how you wrote it for your first time the only issues were the writing quality and maybe you could be more detailed but it’s my personal opinion of course but actually I enjoyed reading it so thanks for sacrificing your time for this, I wish you good luck in future!

welcome back author hope you update ??????????????

The authors book provides a great amount of context of the environment with plenty of information. However, his obsession to provide every character their own two page dialogue and Background really ruins the entertainment from theMain story. IDk why he bothers when the reader know's they're a dead Man, EX investigator, and the nightclub kid (Achim). However, this is an Author who Clearly loves to write. I hope to read more of his work as he Improves. P.S Author... you forgot to mention the brain crystal from Martin Hais in chapter 290. (MC Never absorbed it in future chapters)

Although some chapters are somewhat bland, I like this novel. Its merits completely make up for its shortcomings.Please update mrrrrrrrrrrrrrr