A slow fall - Reviews

I’m loving it. However I do agree with many other reviews, the system holds his hand a little to much. I understood at the beginning however he got his own land to build a factory like 100-200 chapters ago and still has yet to do it, just relies on the system. We have yet to see the “Genius Weapon Designer”. Im still enjoying it very much though and hope it doesn’t get dropped. Anyways you release chapter pretty much everyday so keep up the hard work. Needs some work but overall is a great story.

You ever watch DBZ, where one fight spans 10 episodes? This novel is similar, it tells a decent story once you get past the irritating start, but there is just too much filler. Author needs to stop rephrasing everything and just get to the point. Cut down on the unnecessary backstory, you don’t need that much world building. Really difficult to read and get into it.

The only mistake I could see was Commas placing, nothing else. the words are well chosen and Raith who was expected for big got something that worth nothing (Dust of Death). a new type of power balance is very good, Archons bs Primordials. looking forward to it

This book is really well written and the story is awesome! Love the characters! Overall would recommend to anyone. Only problem is the author has seemed to stop updating all together not sure when the author will be back it’s a bummer.

Unique characters with tons of comedic interplay between them. They all have their own motives and desires. This also lends itself to gradually revealing more and more of the backstory. The characters, despite some of their unlikable behavior, do manage to grow on you.... like a foot fungus maybe, but it still count. ???

First review I’ve ever done on a novel after reading quite a few. This novel I feel is only getting started .  Originally I thought the main character was going to be an emotionless villain who only cares about himself but as the story continues we can slowly see him being more expressive. I also quite like how this romance has its up and downs and isnt just a Mc and mindless fl. I usually like books with harem aspect but this one has me invested to the point I paid for all locked chap. Wouldn’ mind harem tho, would feel bad if aurora is thrown aside . I feel at some point soon mc will also have a very dinamic change as far as emotions and personality goes. What we know of him is still a mystery which I would like to see slowly start to unravel. We know he has a impressive family background which is being hinted at constantly. I do hope that it doesn’t turn out like a cultivation novel where we have to wait 2000 chaps for it to happen. Overall will keep reading this book , normally not the type to read urban novels due to how short they tend to be compared to fantasy. would like to see more descriptive details about side characters as a refresher to what they look like .

Good book, still on the first volume and things are getting interesting

Great Novel ?? don't stop writing it. I personally think this novel has potential to be one of the best ones's out there .

Isang lalaki.

"Your harem? The Legion?!" She then asked loudly in shock "Olga finally decided to help us? I thought her land was defeated too."

Beatrice's father is funny. He could do all lengths just to stop his precious daughter from entering the military ????

"I know, but they already promised to pay me a large tip. And because you are my best friend you'll gladly give up space" Gino pushes Seth. "The table is ready," Gino said to Romina and Jana." How come they look familiar…" Seth wondering where he saw the two.