A Mountain Full Of Gold

Didn't really like that fact that he became a model. He also met with a bunch of different girls that seem to be a love interest. I hope there is no harem.

i read all the chapters in one go, very enjoyable so far, hopefully it will stay this way, big points for him being op and i really liked the backstory before the modern life started.

Honestly your story was one of the best on this site, but the las 4-5 chapters since the end of the tournament don't really fill me with hope for the next part of your story... I mean i know your mc is not omnipotent, but with the extremly long life he had, and all the dificulty for reaching the peak , he should have known to not show his hand so soon... :( Look what happened now, the members of his clan are killed like flies, what was the point of create a clan so soon if it's got destroyed so easily :(

This novel is amazing as far as I've read.Not to be that kind of guy that criticizes stuff, but I think that its good to see novels that show the actual way in which the characters cultivate instead of just saying that they cultivate and only show them getting stronger instead of the small detail of how they get stronger.

If the idea is to be judged here this piece would get 5* easily. Unfortunately, bad grammar makes the reading experience almost unbearable. Use of personal pronouns is wrong and that is a reason why the story is so so so confusing at times. Tbh it is hard to say something to story and character development and design. Focus while reading is simply somewhere else. If you are able to overlook grammar, spelling and word mistakes and errors (!!) then this one could be a gem for you. If you are annoyed by a shit to of mistakes and errors (again!!!) please do yourself a favor and avoid this piece at any cost.

I love the story, I hope it continues for at least another 100 chapters.