The concept is ok, and the world background is cliche. MC unlocks the soldiers, but apart from the beginning dungeon doesn't use them. The character design is 2-D and the concept of unlocking talents is stupid. the only good thing about this novel is the above mediocre translation quality. The only thing I recommend is not reading this book.
The story is very good. Unlike 99% of the stories on this site, this one is very well written so far. The main protagonist is not brain dead and can think. So far there has been no romance that drags down the story. His system is pretty well done and not annoying. The world background is well told and diverse. Overall a very good read. Keep up with the updates!.
k how do I say it?? I don't comment or review mostly but now I felt like I should just do itmyou have a good writing style author I like the way you write fights. clearly only few characters are introduced till now it makes easy for me to not get confused.
Hello! I am the author of this book. I have been writing Why the Gods for almost a year now. And through that whole time I realized, I never planned for that to be my only story. This book was rattling around in the back of my head. It's drastically different from my fiction books because this one takes place in areas I have actually been to. This book will be updated less frequently than my other one but the chapters will be consistently about 2k words and more thought out. I am taking more time to put this one together and I hope that it shows. The more I write the better I feel about my fiction. Please read this story and tell me what you think of it. The horror aspect will really be more about GORE than the traditional horror you get from Silent Hill or Resident Evil. Please motivate me along as you enjoy my story. If you read it please leave a review. I thank you for taking the time to read this book!
(Sena) "Lord, we have sent out 2 Chunin level shinobi to Tsuchigumo Clan who will arrive in 2 days if they have no inconveniences. I have also sent 1 Jonin and 2 Chunin level shinobi to search for the Iburi Clan."
"I'm busy these past two days that I forget to check this important email. Let's see what it's about." she said as she clicks the link. She read the email and was surprised. "Oh my! I made it to the final interview. Wait its tom afternoon. I should start preparing now." She excitedly said.
I threw his file back on the table and opened the door we came through. I looked back at him and said, "You don't house criminals in here. You take care of monsters and beasts!"
Sinar cahaya keluar dari kristal, membentuk hologram 3D besar tepat di depan Li Yao. Dengan cahaya energi roh, gambar holografis Pulau Naga Banjir Iblis muncul di depan mata Li Yao.